rate_review Reviews

Wow! I'm so glad I stumbled upon this fic. I can't wait to see what happens next. I found a few errors in Chapter 3 as follows:

When Jess is describing Meg it says, "brown her" instead of "brown hair" [Just a typo]
Then I found two incorrect uses of than/then forms.
When Nate is talking, it should be "...we know more than poor people..."
A second incident is when Nate is telling Meg about arriving the next day, it should be "...three hours earlier than today..."

I used to find using then/than to be confusing as first but a tip I found on a grammar site:
"Than is used in comparative statements. EXAMPLES:
~Another pair of words that I see misused far more often than not is than and then.
~He is taller than I am.
Then is used either as a time marker or with a sequence of events. EXAMPLES:
~I took all of the exams in the morning, and then I spent the rest of the day catching up on sleep.
~Back then we knew what was expected of us."

Hope that helps!

I like it a lot! I am very untreated to see how Meg will handle the whole situation. I am especially curious about Jessica and how she will be addressed by Meg. I will most definitely read on!