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Is it bad that I find myself liking Obane the most(I mean he's an ass, but he's straight forward about it). And while James is justified in his anger and overreactions at the moment, I probably won't start to like him until he mellows out a bit. Maybe now that they are both in their humanoid forms(and after Obane heals) they can get to know each other better and perhaps see where the other is coming from.

For the record, REALLY don't like that Ytal guy. I have a feeling he's going to be nothing but trouble.

Anywho, very interesting story and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

O my poor Obane h did deserve that but he just wanted to protect his babys.... And Poor James!!! I so can't wait for more^^See you!!!

Well so far you haven't turned "him" into some little helpless "thing" who becomes all content with his new "role" in life. Hopefully you are not going to. If you are, warn me now so I can quit reading. Spontaneous abortion would be a good solution at this point and allow him to make his own choices but that is probably too much to hope for.

OMG!!! I can't really wait for next chapter...James just so angry and uncontrollable but I think it's reasaonable cause Nobody talk or explain clearly to him and Bane is too stubborn and proud to be the Omega Dragon which made him to listen to anything too. OHHH!!!! Really want to read more....Always support you. ^^

I cant tell u how much i love this story. I enjoy reading mpreg every now and then and you've included it into this story beautifully. I love your writing, your characters and I hope this story never ends!

Amazing chapter !
I almost feel sorry for the black dragon ! ^^'
Thanks for the fast update...

Hello, your story is really interesting so I can only encourage you to continue to keep writing new chapters. I'll eagerly wait for the next update!

Love your story, lots of potential here. Really enjoy reading, great characters, story and world, thank you for sharing with us.
Cant wait for more XD
Greeting, Chi

Please Please Moooooorreeeee!!!!! I'm so in love with this story!!!
Poor boy!! I wonder when he'll be able to change back to his human self? He's pregnant right? Will he have to wait 'till after he gives birth to his eegs to become humain again or will he be abel to carry the eegs while he's in his humain form? Hummmm questions haha I guess I'll keep reading and find out! ;)

Thanks for the story!

Oh I just adore this story!!!!! Poor James^^ I wonder what that creature in the water was... I can't wait for more see you again soon!!!!