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June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I knew Ytal was behind the poisoning! Please keep up the good work and update soon. :D
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June 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dragon Drive is the best dragon story I've read so far...i mean the the first few chapters were damn hilarious with the whole scenario unfolding about James condition. You did a really good job with making this story really different and more desirable than other stories out their. I'm jus dying to see what James will do next after leaving obane in the alley...it's a lot of fun reading him,pls update soon:))tc.
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June 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! Really wonder what that thing is that the poor iniccent tarren meets in the cave!!! See you again soon!!!
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June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Noooo...Tarren!
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May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man, was that a good read. It's been a long time since I've read a good story purely about dragons. It's a shame that James cut their unofficial date short so quickly. But, I'm glad that they're allowing themselves (if in miniscule portions) to finally get to know one another a little better. I hope that his uncle's pendant wasn't of sentimental value.
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May 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man i really like James, and i wish him and obane wouldn't end up together cause i really dislike him. And i would be way more pissed then james is if i was in his shoes. Anyway I really like your story (i'm not even a fan of this genre thats how much i love your story
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May 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
James is a bastard. I like him less and less with each chapter :/ And I definitely didn't like the idea of Obane going insane and his kid being obliged to put him out of misery.
I hope that James will sonn straighten up. His behaviour is getting tedious and ceased to be funny many chapters before. What a prick!
Thank you for the new chapter, till next time!
I hope that James will sonn straighten up. His behaviour is getting tedious and ceased to be funny many chapters before. What a prick!
Thank you for the new chapter, till next time!
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May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gasp, what a below belt trick! ;) I'm sure Bane will get him back later. Le sigh, now I want to go to Italy.
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May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I should have figured he was going to forgive, and end up with Bane. Sorry, but I can't hack that not matter how he justifies it, Bane is a rapist, and that's not okay in my book. The fact he's an arrogant ass is only icing on the cake. I had hoped for better for James.
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May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love fictionpress for letting me know when you put on a new chapter. love fanfiction.net for all the support good stories get here.
The cliffy end of the chapter was a wonderful idea. I totally forgot of the effect milk can have on dragons. So it was unexpected.
At this point I anticipate James to get in some sort of trouble in the next chapter, being without protection and all.
I was highly amused and really enjoyed myself when reading the part about their bickering in the car and in the clothing shop.
It was really really nice because James fights his attraction, but at the same time he happens to let his guard down and gets to know Obane a bit more (and we with him). Since I resemble that woman in the shop and drool over this handsome character whenever he appearts, more so when he sports horns and black scales (he's way too cool in his dragon form), I am happy whenever James - through his inquiring - uncovers a bit more of the mystery that is Obane.
Jame's jealousy seemed more linked to his dragon's possessive nature towards their mate. Further away, it'd be nice to see his human part be jealous of his man, while fighting but admitting his attraction. The scene where both he and the woman stood speechless when Obane exited from his fitting room was was great. I kept smiling like a fool ;)
Obane's ability to see beyond Jame's fits of rage does justice to his old age and his experience in life. At the same time, his inability to understand everything human related is almost funny but well suits his character. Always collected, well-mannered in his human guise but possessive, driven by instincts, prideful when less in control: a contradiction that is nice and makes an all-round character.
These last few weeks I've stopped reviewing the stories I happened to read 'cause I promised myself to find enough time to write a nice long review for Dragon Dive first. :D
Hope to read more soon and I'll try to leave my opinion/appreciation every time. :)
The cliffy end of the chapter was a wonderful idea. I totally forgot of the effect milk can have on dragons. So it was unexpected.
At this point I anticipate James to get in some sort of trouble in the next chapter, being without protection and all.
I was highly amused and really enjoyed myself when reading the part about their bickering in the car and in the clothing shop.
It was really really nice because James fights his attraction, but at the same time he happens to let his guard down and gets to know Obane a bit more (and we with him). Since I resemble that woman in the shop and drool over this handsome character whenever he appearts, more so when he sports horns and black scales (he's way too cool in his dragon form), I am happy whenever James - through his inquiring - uncovers a bit more of the mystery that is Obane.
Jame's jealousy seemed more linked to his dragon's possessive nature towards their mate. Further away, it'd be nice to see his human part be jealous of his man, while fighting but admitting his attraction. The scene where both he and the woman stood speechless when Obane exited from his fitting room was was great. I kept smiling like a fool ;)
Obane's ability to see beyond Jame's fits of rage does justice to his old age and his experience in life. At the same time, his inability to understand everything human related is almost funny but well suits his character. Always collected, well-mannered in his human guise but possessive, driven by instincts, prideful when less in control: a contradiction that is nice and makes an all-round character.
These last few weeks I've stopped reviewing the stories I happened to read 'cause I promised myself to find enough time to write a nice long review for Dragon Dive first. :D
Hope to read more soon and I'll try to leave my opinion/appreciation every time. :)