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Well, I hope you're happy. My keyboard just melted and my hard drive combusted due to all the heat coming from this chapter. Now I have to go to Best Buy and get another computer. lol j/k But seriously, wow. Yeah right Preston won't be back. Sure.....

He was thinking so much about Randy in this chapter that I'm curious to know how Randy's doing with Felix. Oohhhh, maybe they broke up and now Randy's available....

Anyway, it would be great to hear about him. (hint, hint) lol

Oh, and speaking of hints, or other characters....how are your boys Harley and Antonio doing? I really miss that story.

I gotta tell you timecap - you are a terrific author. Your stories are so gripping, the chapters are so well-written, your characters are interesting people that I just want to keep reading about.

Can you tell I love your stories? lol

Ok, looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Hello,

I'm really enjoying this story. I like the gradual progression-but poor haru, pres needs to man up one way or another. Keep updating :D

I think that was a pretty shitty thing Preston did to Haru; just leaving him there after they took a train to get to the festival, then he meets some chick and can't keep it in his pants long enough to finish the night with Haru? I would have been hurt too.

At least I hope Preston's playing it safe with this Airi girl. Pretty name btw: Airi. Did I spell it right?

This is hard to read, mainly because i am consumed by nostalgia and raging jealousy of preston. I am so excited that you are writing this!! I really wanted to know more about preston! but now i hate him because he went to a butler cafe. yeah. i actually hate him for his cool life. i really dont think i will find this easy to read yet at the same time i am addicted. and i am not going for haru (even though he is a butler and awesomely cute and cool). i ship for preston/teacher. thanks for writing this!!

I really enjoyed reading this! Preston seems like a very lively character, and I'm really interested in seeing how he interacts with Haru. But, who I REALLY want to know about is Ikari.

Good job! I look forward to reading more in the future :)

Glad to see Preston adjusting to Japan.

The way you describe Tokyo is really beautiful. It must be an awesome city to visit.

I'm looking foward to the next chapter, timecap. :)

I have absolutely no idea where you are going with this but I love it!!

That was funny in the "cafe". lol A place where girls will be treated as princesses! Why don't they have places like that in the states??

I like Haru, but I want to know what's up with the other teacher, Ikari was it? I forgot his name, sorry.

Love it, love it, love it, Timecap! I love reading this from Preston's pov.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Funny thing: I was a communications major in college. lol

I made an AFF account forever ago, but I never log in, normally if I want to tell an author how much I love them I send them an email so I almost never log in; however, I read the first chapter of this and needed to respond and found no email listing. So I went through my many emails and passwords to find the one that would let me review to your story. There's not much so far but I like what I have read.
I was scrolling through the various stories looking for something new and interesting, not looking at the authors and happened upon Third World. Then Preston mention Randy and I freaked out because Between the Two is one of my favorite stories on AFF and I am so excited to see where Third World is headed. I practically squealed realizing who Preston was and I can't wait to see what turns his love story will take.
Waiting in avid anticipation,
~Resa