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by timecap_cell

person Roriette
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg this story is honestly really beautiful. I'm so glad I read it. Passed by it many times and never really picked it up, but I decided to read it on a whim today, and man am I glad I did. You caught me in the first chapter; everything just flowed so well, and I was definitely enraptured by your writing. And of course, my adoration for Japan is also a reason why I enjoyed this story so much.
I love how Preston and Haru's relationship develop, heighten, and conclude. At first I wasn't sure where you were going to go with Preston, who he's going to end up with, and etc, and I'm so glad he falls in love with Haru, because omg let me tell you, he reminds me of Sebastian so much. I was just imagining him he whole time.
I WANT A HARU IN MY LIFE xoxo
I'd die happily.

I feel so bad for Preston in the end, and I'm not going to say he deserves it, because I do like his character a lot.
Just. I love Haru more!! Hehe 8D
Banzai for beautiful writing, storytelling, Japan, and sexy butlers! This is one of my fave stories in AFF. The fact that you made me actually squeal and laugh in real life is proof of its awesomeness.
Thank you for this awesome piece of literature my dear writer-san!
person Siminol
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story, wish Preston did not have to be hurt like that though. However the ending was still beautiful, and I will definitely be reading and following more of your stories.
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The End???? The End????? I wasn't prepared for The End timecap!!!!

What about Ikari? What about Preston's mom wanting to take him back home? What about his face? He's gonna have more than a scar; the whole side of his face was burned off, wasn't it? Won't he need skin grafts?

Maybe a sequel??? Well, I guess it'd be a sequel to a sequel, lol.

Awesome story timecap!

Now you have to get back to "Another Side". That is the story I cannot wait to start reading again. :)
person Joyful
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. What I hate is jealous people. It was not Preston's fault that he was born with good looks and people like Ikaira are real and evil. The last chapter was really hard to read because it reminds me of the stories were men have damaged women's faces solely because they were beautiful. Hope you keep writing!
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god....I had my hand over my mouth since that asshole kicked the iron stove,just knowing something bad would happen.Funny thing is,I've been listening to 'Love the Way You Lie'by Rihanna the whole time!And then I realized how much it fitted that situation!It was as if they were singing about this very situation!There's actually a part that goes :"If she ever tries to fucking leave again Imma tie her to the bed and set this house on fire"!

OH MY GOD!Poor Preston!I mean I don't even have Preston's looks but I know I would've seriously fell apart if something like that had happened to me!And I know that even if I was cool with it at first my heart would surly break when the bandages came off and the severity of the situation really hit me.And then I would have insecurities for the rest of my life and would be haunted by the constant paranoia that my boyfriend(who is more beautiful than me and the fact that we don't stand on the same ground anymore)doesn't love me anymore,is repulsed by me in fact,and is going to leave me at any moment!Just think about it!I can just imagine it as clear as day even if I'm not in that situation!
Preston really handled it with grace for know...I wonder how he'll react when he first sees his face...

Come on!No epilogues?But that's just plain mean!I wanna know what will happen next!
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dammit timecap, you oould you leave a cliffie like that? lol

Shit, what's Ikari going to do with Preston? What was it that coated Preston's cup? A roofie?

Now I'm on pins and needles. :)
person Fire_Demon
schedule May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god oh my god oh mon dieu oh dios mio oh mein gott OH MY GOOOD!!!
A cliffhanger.Of COURSE it ends with a cliffhanger!Whatever else was I expecting!So much cruelty!It's not unheard of but it is rare!

I said I had a Doctor Jekyll and Mister Hyde feeling about Ikari!He just didn't seem stable!I wonder if that scar he has is the result of an act of self defense?Maybe he attacked that dude he was talking about instead of the other way around?

Oh dear Preston...Karma's such a bitch,isn't it?
person Snow
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That...... was extremely unexpected and I congratulate you on that gigantic plot twist!

I thought Ikari was just put out or jealous that Preston wasn't spending time with him or didn't want to date him or whatever. this just akjefahweriuwer. You don't see this dramatic twist very often! I'm really excited!
person CandyCoatedCyanide
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AND HARU COMES BACK AND SAVES HIM, RIGHT? RIGHT?? D=!

On a more serious note, this story should have so many more reviews than it does. This is very well written and I adore the characters (even Preston, who was a big jerk in the last story). Part of me believes Preston's good luck has officially run out (with Randy never reporting him, even though she could have, with simply finding Haru, etc) and Karma is coming back to him, but Preston has done a lot of changing and growing up...and two wrongs don't make a right. However, Ikari has always had the crazy dude vibe from the get go and I was hoping nothing would happen (which is still a possibility, I suppose), but we readers will have to eagerly wait to find out!

Looking forward to the next chapter! Best of luck!
person Chanii
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG I was just waiting for this scene to happen! Lol I have fallen in love with this story. I am greatly looking forward to the next update.