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for Third World

by timecap_cell

person Lavvy
schedule February 9, 2020 at 12:00 AM

such a lovely story, sweet and romantic and unexpected. The dynamic of their relationship was very nice to see,I like then things are not so stereotypical 😉

person Rainwater
schedule June 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, I adored Haru more than I can say. Thank you for sharing!
person vrey
schedule November 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful love story! It was so lovely and I think I fell a bit for Haru myself ;) I've read all of your other work and find myself to be quite the fan <3 GREAT JOB! You have a very fluid style of writing that I appreciate greatly.
person Sakura
schedule May 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story was AMAZING!!!! I enjoyed reading it so much, I didn't want it to end. And oh how I wish that Haru was real. You made me fall in love with a fictitious character. Lol. Thank you so much for this story and sharing it.
schedule August 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this was a really good story. i liked the sexual intensity of their relationship and the master/servant dynamic. haru was such a sweetie pie and a hero as well. nice work.
schedule April 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. I loved it! Such a lovely story! And I really love how in love Haru is to Preston and he never fails showing it to him. :") They really are perfect for each other! <3
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Bravo.
person Merely Truth
schedule July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very beautiful romantic story ! Thank you, they are so special these two, and in Japan "third world", a pleasant idea you had !!

A french mother,
Bonjour de la France
Merely Truth
schedule May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Timecap, fantastic epilogue!

Haru is a dream come true. Who knew that under that calm, cool, confident exterior, was a sweet, caring and generous guy? lol

Preston will have a lot to overcome emotionally. But with Haru there by his side, he'll be fine.

Excellent story Timecap! :)
person BluRein
schedule May 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I FINALLY found the time to continue reading this story, and goodness, I really had no idea what Ikari was that crazy! I'm so glad that Preston eventually warmed up to Haru as well. The story was smooth and sweet, if I could describe it as such. While others may have been a bit annoyed with the ending result, I felt that it was fitting. The egotistical man that we met in the beginning became a very settled, loving person. Well, just a bit at least :p

Great job! I'm looking forward to your future stories!

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