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March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOHHHHH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm Loving this already!!!! I had to read the name again just to make sure that Caleb wasn't Cain that walked through the door all SUMG..... I'm telling ya you've got another hit on your resume of writings!!!! read ya later!
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March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, very good introduction chapter of what might be a darker story than we are used to. (I am not sure but you mentioned something about the Good Son.) I hope Trevor doesn't call Cain the Barn Boy that wouldn't be nice. It sounds like Judy is going to adopt or foster care Cain (by the story description). I am curious to read more and find out what you have planned.
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March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright, now I am thinking that maybe Cain is the devil like his grandfather or father was convinced he was and that's why he was locked up because he is dangerous. I mean how else could he appear to Trevor like he did in his dream if it wasn't something to do with the supernatural/paranormal thingy. Anyway, I am kind of nervous to keep reading because I don't usual like stuff to do with Satan but maybe I got it all wrong, lol. I trust your writing though so will be around until the end. I just hope Cain doesn't kill Caleb or vice versa.
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March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW now I'm wondering just who is going to be the one to hold Trev's heart in love and who just wants to own it??????? read ya later!
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March 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is going to prove to be very interesting and what will the jealous Caleb do when Cain shows up with Trevor? I wonder if Trevor will recognize Cain from his dream.
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello again!! So, this new story is very interesting and different from CB and BTBC plus the main 'stars' are young and school aged. I did like the first chapter. I felt bad for Cain being treated so horribly by his grandfather. I like Judy very much and Trevor I am trying to figure out, lol. So far so good! ~ Katie ~
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! I like the new characters! I like them all so far! Cain seems like such a sweetie, but I remember you saying it was going to be like a good son type of story so maybe he is evil?? Or is Trevor? IDK but I like it, and can't wait for more! Much love!
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oooo nice, think im gonna like this story lol
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, welcome back! I am glad that was fast. I too wonder now if Cain is going to turn out evil and eventually try to kill Trevor so he can be the good son to Judy. I will continue to read and find out. I am a sap though for happy endings.
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February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice start! please update soon!!