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for Imprisoned

by 2rainsong2

schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg Caleb is a psycho! I can't believe he actually KILLED Trevor's friend, just because he is his friend. Omg he has a screw loose. The problem is of course, is that no one will even think of Caleb. I don't think they will put two and two together. And if Trevor ever decides to end it with Caleb, Caleb will most likely stalk him, terrorize him, God knows what else. Now I'm afraid for Trevor. Oh shit, especially now since Cain's coming to live with them. Cain is not safe there.

On a more comical note, or should I say mortifying note: the scene where the three moms saw Trevor in all his glory was wow. My mouth was hanging open. Poor Trevor. And Judy too, but more poor Trevor.

Excellent chapter! Now I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next one! :)
person Anshu
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Can't wait for Cain to move in !
person wolfluv
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWWW THANK YOU!!!! Totally LOVING this story as well!!! That was kinda CREEPY when Caleb snuk into Trev's room that early in the morning without waking mom what did he mean it was unlocked maybe Trev was too sleep addeled to think on that one.... Poor Cain crying thinking Trev didn't want him the same way maybe??? OOOO WHAT'S going to happen when Caleb finds out about Cain moving in..... CHILLS JUST WENT DOWN MY SPINE!!!!! read ya later!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
We are finally learning the truth about Caleb and I don't like him one little bit and am glad that Trevor is starting to see him for what he is.
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had two awesome chapters to catch up on! Cain's 'visions' if that's what you call them, when he sees people and does things to them but it's not really him doing those things, right? So can he see crimes being committed, like in "Medium"?

Caleb is bad, bad news. He is so controlling it is unbelievable. I don't trust him at all. He's pretty scary. He's like psycho. When he sees Cain, he's gonna flip, knowing that he's living with Trevor.

Terrific chapters rain! :) Can't wait to read more!
person Jessie
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Something tells my gut that there is more to Caleb than meets the eye and it isn't good either. Where did he come from and who are his parents?
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Snow, snow, snow.... please go away and don't come back until next winter! I don't know but Caleb is becoming quite scarey and possessive of Trevor. I can't wait for Cain to come live with Trevor and Judy. I am anxious about Cain and Trevor coming face to face for the first time too.
person anniea
schedule March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo I love these kind of stories too! can't wait for an update.
person wolfluv
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
SUPERNATURAL AWAY PLEASE! it's your story write it how you want! Oh and by the way the face in the mirror is that is after Trev is it one of Caleb's old psycho boyfriends???? Or is it Cain's hidden other half????? HMMMMMM.... read ya later!
person Misakixusagi
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
U know i never even expected the story to take this sort of line, its surprising, but i think in a way i kinda like it, cause it makes it have a twist where u have no idea whats going on lol
Hope u get it sorted in your head too lol