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for Imprisoned

by 2rainsong2

person wolfluv
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WELL BRING THE KINK ON!!!!! I was kinda hoping that Cain had some magical sperm that would seal up Trev's ass to Caleb but..... Ya never know could be with their final connection thing happening... I just hope Momma manson and Daddy manson don't rush into Calebs room with a video camera young amature boys and internet.... read ya laters!!!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord, what kind of evil plans does Caleb have in store for Trevor?! I wish that Cain could somehow teleport himself into the room to save Trev from Caleb's clutches. I hope Caleb doesn't hurt (kill) anymore of Trevor's friends.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Caleb is freaking scaring me and I can't imagine what he's going to do to poor Trevor but bringing out chains doesn't sound too good right now. I like Lyle and Gillian so please don't kill them off like Nigel, ok? ~~ Katie ~~
person dazedandconfused
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Caleb and his parents kind of remind me of the Adam's Family, their creepy and they're kooky but more mysterious and spooky. Or, they remind of the weird people living in the apartment complex in Rosemary's Baby. I am frightened now for what Caleb is going to do with Trevor. I am happy Cain made him feel safe for a bit and he's going to have to hold onto that to get through this nightmare.
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Caleb is one sick s.o.b. He's gonna tie Trevor to the bed now? And what? Keep him there? Trevor made Caleb's parents seem like Stepford parents; basically robots.

I bet Cain can 'sense' if Trevor is in trouble. Will he visit him against Trevor's will?

I SO love this story! :)
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Where have I been that I missed two chapters!

Well I totally didn't see that one coming about Cain's biological father. That's really too bad. I wonder if he could have protected Trevor in some way from Caleb.

And very interesting about Cain's twin. What was going on at the hospital? Did something happen and they had to cover it up?

Ok, on to the next chapter! :)
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Cain is not going to be safe if he has to live with Caleb.

He really lucked out when he escaped from the hospital. Karen and Omar were great, but he could have really run into the wrong people.

I wonder if Judy tells Trevor how much she hates Cain's real father, he'll come forward and tell her he knows where Cain is hiding?

Can't wait for the next chapter rain! :)
person wolfluv
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The cliffy whore strikes again.....!!!!!!!! Thank you for the pre-emptive strike though with the promise of new pages coming soon!!! I kneel before you my Queen of cliffys!!!! read ya laters!!! bty Happy St P's to you and yours!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the cliffhanger witchy witch strikes again!!!!! You seriously are the queen of the cliffhangers and I love them even though they drive me crazy with anguish. At least I know you update daily, so I don't have to suffer too long. I hope you know how much Caleb is creeping me out (like in buggy bug ways cause I hate spiders and creepy crawly insects) they make me want to itch myself like I have a rash or chicken pox again. Do Cain's parents especially father have any idea of the kind of evil person he is? HAPPY ST. PATRICK'S DAY TO YOU AS WELL MY GREEN LEPRECHAUN AUTHOR.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy St. Pat's Day to you and Aaron! OMG, what is Trevor going to do? He's damned if he does and damned if he doesn't go. I am beginning to wonder if anyone can stop Caleb.