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for Imprisoned

by 2rainsong2

person dazedandconfused
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sonny, Serena and Caleb....DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!! What happened behind those closed doors between them that caused Caleb to die in Judy's arms and then the explosion or whatever it was inside the room? Inquiring minds want to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person dazedandconfused
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I should be running down the street to catch the bus so I won't be late for work but damn you're good with updating and I couldn't stop myself from checking in here first. Is Cain planning on dying and that's why he whispered to Trevor that he loved him and always would? You should get an award for being the queen of cliffhangers and we all would nominate you. I better go read Biker Trash and then get my running shoes on. I just hope I don't end up sliding all the way down the hill with my arms flailing and falling on my rump which has happened a lot this winter.
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Shit, Cain. That's the worst thing you can do is try to find Caleb. How can he protect himself from his psycho brother?

And yeah, the apple sure doesn't fall far from the tree; Sonny was psycho too.

I'm at least glad that everyone now knows how dangerous Caleb really is.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Show down time! I hope Cain makes it out alive and Caleb is sent somewhere to get help.
person wolfluv
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAAOWZA!!!! WELL GO MOM GO!!! You're doing fantastic with this story!!! And yes get your ass to bed CLIFFY QUEEN we can't have our Queen nodding out on us while writing!!! read ya laters... Oh and don't worry I'll let you know when you're queen and whore.... hee hee hee you know you love me!!!!
person Jessie
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh for the love of God, I can't believe you just did that to us! How could you?! I don't know what is worse trying to finish my income tax paperwork or reading your stories and hanging with these cliffhangers from hell, lol. I love them though. I hope Caleb knows what he's doing and that Trevor doesn't wake up and try to follow him.
person Jessie
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I meant I hope Cain knows what he's doing not Caleb!!!!
schedule March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Caleb is beyond evil. Luckily Trevor's mom is suspicious and luckily Lyle and Cain are calling her.

I wonder if Cain knew that Caleb, the face in his mirror, was his brother.

So who took Caleb when he was an infant? Caspian? Was he keeping tabs on the babies mother? Why did he take one and not the other? And how did baby Caleb disappear when Nurse Monique was right there in the nursery? That's the part that mystifies me. :)

I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :)
person Misakixusagi
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh cant wait for more, god i hate caleb with a passion,such a bastard!
person dazedandconfused
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want someone to torture Caleb slowly like he's doing to Trevor before they kill him. He needs to be taken out and fast. I wish Cain was powerful enough to stop his twin brother.