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for Imprisoned

by 2rainsong2

person Minxx
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, exciting and heart-warming. Love the supernatural stuff too, now we need to get sweet Ollie a guy of his own! A sequel with all these beautiful people would be wonderful.
schedule June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a great ending rain! :)

I can just picture Judy wielding some sort of saber sword or laser or something and just blowing those Caspians to kingdom come. lol

Now you gotta do a sequel and pair sweet Ollie with someone. :)
person dazedandconfused
schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Rain, I can't believe you have finished yet another story (and begun a new one too)! Congrats.

I know I have been lax about reviewing this one but I did enjoy it. I am just not into this type of paranormal activity, LOL. It confuses me and I confuse way to easy.

Great job! I am happy for Trevor and Cain.
schedule June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I am glad you took a chance and wrote something like this which is way out of the norm to what you usually write. You did a very good job with it. It's nice to see an author broaden their writing skills. You get better each time.
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story
schedule June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah shit, Rain! I'm at the edge of my seat! Cain's gotta save Trevor!!!! lol

I'm glad Ollie turned out to be a good guy in the end. :)

Can't wait for the last chapters!

I see you have a new story up. Gotta get to that one tomorrow.
person wolfluv
schedule June 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!
schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, what are they gonna due to Trevor????? I'm glad Ollie seems a bit guilty. Not like that shit, Caleb.

And did Cain wake up?

Man, this was an exciting chapter rain! Thanks for updating this!! :)
schedule May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god the suspense is killing me! What's going to happen next? Tell me tell me!
person wolfluv
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I BOW BEFORE YOU MY CLIFFY QUEEN!!!!! I just knew it that he was one of THEM I'm thinking Emily is too but maybe from a diffrent branch hey YOU'RE the only one who knows evil laugh.... Anywho I can't wait to find out who's in cahoots with who!