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February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
chapter 32
OH NOES!
OH NOES!
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January 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
at long last the two twines meet.
Her poor little nose and his arm. Ouch!
I liked this chapter a lot.
Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
And what her reaction to all of it is.
Oh and the zipper of course.
Great job :)
Her poor little nose and his arm. Ouch!
I liked this chapter a lot.
Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
And what her reaction to all of it is.
Oh and the zipper of course.
Great job :)
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December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28:Is it bad that I was imagining him dancing in the kitchen? Too cute
Chapter 29:His ex gf is helping the enemy..... I don't like her.
Great job writing. I am excited to see where this goes.
Chapter 29:His ex gf is helping the enemy..... I don't like her.
Great job writing. I am excited to see where this goes.
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November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11+12 is hard to read due to lack of space between sentences. Easily fixed. (Go back and fix them:P )
I don't like that they basically raped him. Poor Simmons
chapter 12 I don't really like T-bones....So I can relate :) No one likes to be left in the dark and ignorant.
Chapter 13 A way to a man's heart is through his stomach I've heard... BACON lol
Chapter 14 The imagery of him crunching on a contact is completely disgusting. That being said.. Well done :)
Chapter 15 ooooo I want to know what is the Readme.exe Good hook on this chapter. Consent of body does not mean consent of mind... :/
chapter 16 so they are all companions o.o Marty.. is a man whore lol. And poor Teresa. Marcia I think...is playing too many games
chapter 17 I always did want Simmon's with him but poor Marcia. For an unexperienced girl She sure is kinky. Maybe Marty's influence
chapter 18 ermmmmmmmm boobs?
chapter 19 o.o is it really derrick?
chapter 20 this chapter came out of no where o.o
chapter 21.... this whole chapter i kept thinking marty was impersonating derrick
chapter 22 oh no abandoned :(
chapter 23 oh mannnnnnn derrick what did you do?
chapter 24 i wonder what they believe is going on
chapter 25 it was marty wasn't it? That caused him to leave... I wonder what he did.
chapter 26 erm derrick is asking a lot... but then again i would be jealous too.
chapter 27 a kill switch? .... completely abhorrent
I had internet for a few days then no internet for a long time. I am sorry that no one has found this gem of a story. If I were you I would repost it with a few corrections and fix the formatting errors. It is a wonderful story so far. I can't wait to find out what Marty did to him. You are a wonderful writer. Don't ever give up.
I don't like that they basically raped him. Poor Simmons
chapter 12 I don't really like T-bones....So I can relate :) No one likes to be left in the dark and ignorant.
Chapter 13 A way to a man's heart is through his stomach I've heard... BACON lol
Chapter 14 The imagery of him crunching on a contact is completely disgusting. That being said.. Well done :)
Chapter 15 ooooo I want to know what is the Readme.exe Good hook on this chapter. Consent of body does not mean consent of mind... :/
chapter 16 so they are all companions o.o Marty.. is a man whore lol. And poor Teresa. Marcia I think...is playing too many games
chapter 17 I always did want Simmon's with him but poor Marcia. For an unexperienced girl She sure is kinky. Maybe Marty's influence
chapter 18 ermmmmmmmm boobs?
chapter 19 o.o is it really derrick?
chapter 20 this chapter came out of no where o.o
chapter 21.... this whole chapter i kept thinking marty was impersonating derrick
chapter 22 oh no abandoned :(
chapter 23 oh mannnnnnn derrick what did you do?
chapter 24 i wonder what they believe is going on
chapter 25 it was marty wasn't it? That caused him to leave... I wonder what he did.
chapter 26 erm derrick is asking a lot... but then again i would be jealous too.
chapter 27 a kill switch? .... completely abhorrent
I had internet for a few days then no internet for a long time. I am sorry that no one has found this gem of a story. If I were you I would repost it with a few corrections and fix the formatting errors. It is a wonderful story so far. I can't wait to find out what Marty did to him. You are a wonderful writer. Don't ever give up.
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September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Always glad to see an abandoned story revived, especially when it is a good one like this. I am pleasantly surprised to see it back so please continue.
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August 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
sorry haven't had internet in such a long time.
i am so glad you kept writing and updating this even with little encouragement.
going to go through and find what chapter i left off of. :)
i am so glad you kept writing and updating this even with little encouragement.
going to go through and find what chapter i left off of. :)
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April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to find out what happens next.
i am enthralled. so glad to have found this.
edge of my seat waiting for what he will do next.
that 'damn' puppy is adorable and i hope everything works out
between everyone.
very happy with this chapter and the story seems to get better and better.
i am enthralled. so glad to have found this.
edge of my seat waiting for what he will do next.
that 'damn' puppy is adorable and i hope everything works out
between everyone.
very happy with this chapter and the story seems to get better and better.
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April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hmm never liked David's hair, too old school for me.
But at least got a sense of what he looks like now.
i feel sorry for Teresa but I wonder how Marty exactly loves her,
if at all.
On one hand this chapter was necessary to the plot, on the other,
it just made me sad for Teresa. Huggles.
But at least got a sense of what he looks like now.
i feel sorry for Teresa but I wonder how Marty exactly loves her,
if at all.
On one hand this chapter was necessary to the plot, on the other,
it just made me sad for Teresa. Huggles.
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April 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens when he gets to see "the creator" again.
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April 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just save your docx as a html and upload it. So much easier. Txt copying like you are doing usually eliminates formatting.
Had the same problem at first
Oh you teaser this story gets more and more interesting as we go.
Had the same problem at first
Oh you teaser this story gets more and more interesting as we go.