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Great first page! I look forward to reading where this is going! read ya later

You wrote this and then left me all day :( I'm very needy can you tell?? lmao I need some fix from my story dealer. Only one other story to read all day and I'm sad.....

I understand needed to write multiple things at once. When inspiration hits it can't be ignored. This was a fantastic read. I love how it's not perfect and it wasn't 'poor little neglected slave boy'. I love the perspective you gave the main character. Resigned to his fate and realistic. I love how he doesn't feel sorry for himself. Update when you get the chance please.