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by knowthyself89

schedule October 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I know I've read this before, but I had to read it again. It's such a good story. I just wish there was more. Xoxo Robin

person staar
schedule September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
the Dr. did good !!!! hope that he starts getting better his boyfriend and brother are the best !!!!!!! thanks for the update !!!!!!
person staar
schedule August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
just passing by to see if you had updated !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please do so soon !!!!!!!!!!!
person staar
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Let me start by thanking you for the update !!!!!!I feel so sorry for him, he really needs to tell his dr. about his fillings , hope he can stay with his boyfriend, he is so nice!!!!! Well hope to see another update soon !!!!!!!!!!
person nik
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far.thank u for update
person staar
schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Almost didn't read this cause of the title, man was I wrong !!!!!loved it so far ....can't wait for more of your story...Really good !!!!!!!
schedule July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love Cilian's new relationship with Kota. It's so cute. Kota is so kind and caring. Really good story great job!
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Michelle, you're back! :)

I'm glad the date went well! I actually love the bickering between the three brothers. They're pretty funny.

I did notice a discrepancy though, in case you wanted to change it: After the tour of the apartment, Cil and Kota walk into the living room and see Mark on the couch flipping through the TV channels. Then further down when Cil and Kota decide to watch a movie, Cil opens up the cabinet to show a flat-screen TV. But...wasn't it already open if Mark was flipping through the stations?
schedule December 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I'm dying to find out what is going to happen. I love your characters, except the ones I'm not supposed to love (I hate those ones just like I'm supposed to.) Can't wait for the next chapter!
person wolfluv
schedule September 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO AWESOME!!! About time he asked him out! I'm so glad things are going his way for the first time in a long time! I love his brothers though they crack me up! Nice to read this again as well too! read ya laters