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for Seducing Lou

by AriieObssession

person Elken
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot.. I like both stories Luca's Wolf Coven and Seducing Lou, Capturing Adrian. I don't mind a little bit shorter updates if I can read them at same time.
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I am first reviewer, I am in a rush to have to make this quick but will leave longer one later. I bet it's Sylvia causing trouble for Sin's club and is somehow stealing from it. Det. Brody is hot and not intimidated by anyone not even his boss. Lou in a fedora makes me think of White Collar and Neal Caffrey, LOL. Gotta run.... be back later with more detailed review. This new story is going to be f-ing fantastic! So excited!
person TRUgrit
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww yay!Ive been waiting for the new ones to come out! Cant wait for Mikas to come out! Sounds steamy so far.. And I love Brody! Calling Lou Dandelion... Riot!! Hope we see more of him, like maybe as another protector of Lou
person addiena saffir
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Do we get to vote on who Leon's mates are going to be? Because if we do One of my votes goes to Det. Brody.
person dazedandconfused
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, me again, back to tell you how much I loved the first chapter! I am about excited about Lou's story as I am about reading about Mika's babies. Sooo, did I mention again how much I love Lou! I just know it's that little twink Sylvia who is somehow stealing shipments from Sin's club but don't know how he's doing it yet. Brody is really sexy as hell. I liked finding out the juicy little details of Adrian's and Cyllis' first meeting. Dandelion, lol, oh my gosh, poor Lou. No, princess, right? I am going to love this story so much. Thanks for updating first chapter so fast! You are amazing!!!!!
person smint45
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was a really nice start^^ Thanks for the prolog^^ See you again soon!!!
person Jessie
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great prologue! I know it's evil of me but I would love to know what Sylvia is going to pull next and would love to see him and Lou get in another fight. I wonder what will happen when Brody meets Sylvia. I hope Sin can keep Lou safe. I am already loving Adrian/Cyllis.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
No, I will be patient and wait for you to write longer chapters to this new story while you work on Luca's Coven. Please don't rush it and take your time. I think you did a wonderful job setting the scene of what's to come for Lou and Sin while giving us a a glimpse of Adrian and Cyllis too.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, that Brody had nerve going to Dorian Grey Memorial and arresting Lou. I wish Luca or Frank had been there. I really adore Bride. It looks like Sylvia has started his quest of vengeance against Lou. Please, please, I beg you don't update this story unless you have time to write super longer chapters and concentrate on Luca's Coven instead. ~~~ Katie ~~~