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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"Holy fuck biscuits!" LOL! You just keep coming up with wonderful lines! Thanks for the update and please please please keep them coming.
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please write more! I really like it! :)
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
“Are you sure you slept with him? You seem much too reasonable.” BWAHAHAHAHA! Great line! So glad to see that you plan on writing a story for Lou and Sinclair. I really thought they didn't get enough exposure in the previous story, and can't wait to read more.
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June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm really starting to wonder if Cheria is good or evil... I think more to the evil side but well we will see.... See you again soon!!!!
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May 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you can use computers at libraries for free !
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March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
TO EVERYONE WAITING PATIENTLY FOR ARIIE'S UPDATES: Hello, I'm Thirdly, Ariie's beta (slowly working my way up to this story, believe me). I wanted to let everyone know that Arrie's computer is down! D: But, the good news is that Ariie might upload MULTIPLE chapters in the next update!!
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February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"I told you not to sleep with that silly little plant." that may be my favorite line of this story, but we'll see. I must say you have some great dialogue going on between your characters and I absolutely love it. Can't wait to see where this goes! :D
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February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OooooooH I LOVE it!! Love it, love it!!!!! Excellent job. Love reading the same scenes from a different POV. You're really good at this. LOL. Ok now I get to try to figure out who Brody's mate/match is. Have we met him? I like the longer chapters and I don't want you to overtax yourself. haha But can I change my vote if I realize that I can't wait for long periods of time?
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February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter, I can't wait to read more. I am even more in love with Brody now, I hope we get to see more of him, I can see him becoming something of an older brother figure for Lou. It's going to be great watching Lou and Sinclair learn more about each other outside the bedroom (not that inside the bedroom isn't great)and are we going to find out more about Lou's past?
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So far so good...Keep up with good work. Lou is really interesting vampire character. He has a attitude. I think he and Sinclair make really hot couple.