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July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was so amazing!!!! I just adore Xavier^^ he is such a brat but gives the story another really funny touch^^ thank you so much for this fast post^^ and see you gain soon!!!
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July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was so amazing!!!! I just adore Xavier^^ he is such a brat but gives the story another really funny touch^^ thank you so much for this fast post^^ and see you gain soon!!!
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"Holy fuck biscuits!" I love this!!!!!!!!!
I wonder what Sinclair is going to think about Lou's new job and will he be able to see Xavier too?
Oh, awesome Det. Brody is back, I like him very much.
I have my suspicions of who killed Cheria and framed Lou.......
I gotta go run and catch the bus before I miss it and am late for work yet again.
Thanks for updating Lou!!!!!!!
I wonder what Sinclair is going to think about Lou's new job and will he be able to see Xavier too?
Oh, awesome Det. Brody is back, I like him very much.
I have my suspicions of who killed Cheria and framed Lou.......
I gotta go run and catch the bus before I miss it and am late for work yet again.
Thanks for updating Lou!!!!!!!
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I had to re-read the three chapters and think I missed reviewing one of them so apologize. I am so in love with Lou that I am literally afraid Sin is going to come after me and knock me off. Anyhoo, Lou's story is one thrilling rollercoaster ride full of twists and turns and laughs too! I love the twist of Lou being Luca's new Thrall and having Xavier be Lou's side-kick as he tries to solve this new mystery is going to be such fun. I am glad you updated this and looking forward to reading more! Oh no, I hope Lou doesn't go to jail for Cheria's murder but it doesn't look good for him.
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh, thanks so much for updating Lou's story!!! I think Lou is going to get in so much trouble and don't know what Luca was thinking of making him his thrall. I mean Lou attracts trouble like a magnet, kind of like bees to honey. I adore Luca's young self Xavier and how only Lou can see and hear him. I think Lou's in trouble but wonder if he's going to use his new strength to take down Det. Brody so he can escape and take care of Luca's task.
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OK, love Lou, love Sinclair, love Adrian in fact I just love it all! Keep up the good work but staying up till the early hours is not allowed! You need to sleep!
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am doing a happy dance since I am so happy you updated Lou's story!!!! It didn't confuse me at all about Xavier aka Luca and the whole thrall business. I LOVE IT! I bet the (pardon the pun) shit is going to hit the fan when Sinclair finds out about Lou being arrested again. Somebody, probably the killer, must have contacted Brody and that's why he was there at the same time as Lou. I hope he doesn't end up at the nutty farm for talking to Xavier.
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love Lou and all the trouble he gets into so am very pleased you updated this story. I love your imagination and how great you are writing such long and awesome chapters and creating characters we both love and hate. I loved the flashback scene of Lou with his mama, very sweet and sad too. This whole thrall business with Lou and Luca or rather his alter ego Xavier is really quite brilliant. Oh no, who killed Cheria and set up Lou to take the rap?!!!
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!!!! Perfect title, too. LOL. Loved Lou and his interaction with young Luca/Xavier. This is definitely going to be interesting. I just love how the detective calls Lou 'Dandelion'. That's so funny. and is this the detective who shivered when Saribel screamed in Luca's Wolf Coven? I just love these stories. Is Sinclair going to be part of the investigation? Cause Lou's going to need lots of help.
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July 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's getting interesting Louis being Luca's thrall. Xavier is pretty amusing character. Keep up with the good work. I'd love to read more