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for Seducing Lou

by AriieObssession

person Thirdly
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was so funny this morning as I scrolled down the Original tab of aff for updates. I was like "la la la~ LOU! *CLICK*" And then, as beta, I notice all the shifts and thought "...I need to finish my editing so I can catch up with this." So, this weekend's all about finishing Mika's Pack.
person Jessie
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, update!

Oh no, poor Lou!

What scared him so much that he reacted that way?!

I am glad Adrian was there for Lou and hope Sinclair doesn't get jealous that Lou wanted him by his side but what was with that red liquid Adrian gave Lou?!

The flashback scene was really fantastic and I want more of them.

I hope Brody goes easy on Lou with the questioning. Where is Xavier/Luca?
person Elken
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter. I'm really intrigued by the new information. It makes sense that there is a reason why Adrian is so obsessive about Lou. I wonder how Sinclair is going to react when he hears more about Lou's past. I'm eagerly waiting for more.
person Jensen
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for this new chapter. I enjoyed finding out how Lou and Adrian first met and how Lou helped them. I think we are going to find out why Lou had this anxiety attack brought on my Cheria's murder and that it had something to do with his past life.
person Shania
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I bet it was his sires blood.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the flashback showing how Adrian first met Lou and can't wait for more! What an ass kicker Lou was back then, LOL. What happened to him? He didn't seem the type that needed protection back then like he does now. I can't wait to find out what the red liquid was Adrian gave Lou and what caused him to freak out like that. I will love some more Cylis/Adrian interaction! Thanks for updating! Anxious for your other updates too!
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I missed Xavier/Luca and was wondering is Xavier/Luca still with Lou while all this is going on? I think Det. Brody is going to have a fight on his hands with Adrian wanting to take Dandelion in for questioning. It's going to be an interesting turn of events for sure.
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awwww pooor Lou Lou! I loved having the flashback of his past. But I'm surprised about the anxiety attacks. I'm gonna take a hint and say that he died a pretty violent death before being turned.How horrible!
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, my poor Lou! BTW, I loved the flashback scene and look forward to finding out more about his past and how he was turned. I have a bad feeling his death was perhaps gruesome and that's why he's having a panic attack now. It would also explain why Adrian is very protective towards him. It's almost like seeing Cheria's body brought back unpleasant memories for him.
schedule July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. A lot of information was given. Poor Lou!! What happened to make him react like that to a dead body? I'm not going to ask any more questions because you'll answer them....eventually. LOL and in your own way.

And who was the vampire that Adrian ran pass and didn't pay attention to? Hummm?