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for Home for Christmas

by Melrick

person Anon
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! You painted wonderful pictures with words.
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a bittersweet and evocative tale, and one that will stick with me for a long time. For someone who hasn't had the joys of snow among his life experiences, you do describe it very well, particularly the sensation of being sandblasted by blowing snow. That's precisely how I'd put it.

Perhaps the afterlife wouldn't be so awful if you could live in such happy memories. I think I'll ponder that fragile hope for a while. :)