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Okay so I thought you were updating once a week so I have been lax on checking the updates. I love how they are moving along. She has so much power in her hand it is wonderful. Great chapter.
Linda

Oh my gosh I love all her new powers.
Linda

Love the description Julian gave about Gabriel making girls go "crazy with desire" and "having no soul"...this could literally describe all the men in their family.lol

Gabriel may be just as horrid as the rest of them, but his gentle nature is a bit of a reprieve from all the aggression. When he gave her oreos and milk and taught her how to play pool, like it was something they did everyday, I was completely shocked....I mean finally, a chance for Eowhyn to just 'be'...a chance for her to be somewhat normal without having to worry about whether or not she's losing herself or struggling to keep up.

While I sympathize with Annabelle - simply b/c I can respect a character that isn't afraid to wear her emotions on her sleeve and put herself out there - I'm glad that you didn't make them besties all of a sudden...it would've been unrealistic and a bit forced if I'm being honest. Oh and I'm happy that Eowhyn has some powers now...but since when can she use them that well. I mean didn't she just find out about her powers, by accident at that so it's a bit weird that now she's like a pro at it. Plus how is it that she's so powerful against some of these pure bloods while she still has a bit of outsider blood in her? A large part of the appeal to this story - aside from this awesome world you've created with all of these dark elements - is the fact that we could relate to Eowhyn b/c she was vulnerable in this strange place, but very quickly she's turning into this super entity, that no one can get at...which takes some of the suspense out of the plot.
Oh and don't be so hard on yourself, the last chapter wasn't nearly as bad as you think it was :)

I recently stumbled upon this story and now I'm completely obsessed with it. I freakin love this story. But I hate Court, just had to put it out there. I prefer Gabriel over him and I really hope Eowyn ends up with him, like she change him or something. Court is a spoiled brat and abusive and I hate him for that, but he also has a nice side, which unfortunately makes me like him as well. I hate him, but like him as well, is that possible? He's way too confusing for a young girl like Eowyn to handle, it's way too much emotion to process, but something about him makes me secretly want them together. He had no right to go through her thoughts though, what was he expecting to find? Nice thoughts about him after all the crap he does?
I love the way you ended it, finally she actually shows Alice that she not weak or afraid to fight her or her cronies. I did a little happy dance at that, which made my younger sisters think I'm a weirdo but, it was totally worth it. I like that she knows how to use her powers, but even without them she's pretty strong. I can't stop thinking about what might happen next, is she gonna fight them*fingers crossed* or is someone like Julian or Annabelle gonna come and stop them? And another thing, I like the fact that Annabelle is no longer trying to kill her, but they're not exactly bestfriends, if they had immidiately become bestfriends it would've been unrealistic or have a forced feeling to it. I like the fact you make them talk, because Eowyn does need someone to talk to, especially since she has almost no one because she not exactly pure blood. Anyways, ill stop my rambling, for now,and I'll repeatedly be checking back for the next chapter like the weirdo I am. :3

Geez!!! That Court >.<
Really love that ending part 8D
Cant wait for the next part ^.^

Just when I thought my hate for of Courtland couldn't get any stronger I'm proven wrong. He had know right going inside of her thoughts and heart like that.So what has nothing but her pictures of her granddad in her heart,She should giving the fact that he raised and loved her.It's really crap that he want's to be the only thing that she things of and loves, how selfish of him, not shocking at all. It's Court where talking about here. All he did was prove what not only she thought about him, but what a lot of people thought of him was right.He's a entitled, nasty and spoiled brat. And the Gabriel is a horrible person,is so full of bull. He's a bad person because girls desire and long for him.Sadly yeah he's addicted to cocaine,but he admits that, but Julian and Courtland are alcoholics.They can't throw stones at Gabriel or anyone else. It seems like Gabriel is a likeable version of Courtland. And they need to stop saying Gabriel killed his sister.she couldn't that he dumped her,but she was still with Countland. So how in the world did Gabriel kill her? Like Eden said she was weak.I still don't understand how they just meet not to long ago and he's her brother(watch she was not liking not to long ago because of the incest thing and she was raised knowing that incest is wrong. How did she go from incest is wrong Courtland her brother being the love of her life. I hope she give in to him and get someone else and loves them.Now she has her power can't wait to see what she does with them.Hope she doesn't abuse them like Court and Annabelle does and did.

The last part was so cool! She needs to kick ass more often whether its with her powers for her knife and gun skills. I really wonder who's she'll end up with. It seems most likely Court but I'm rooting for Julian cause, I don't know I always want the other guy to win. Courts just all over the place. Julian is a much better fit for her (in my opinion). I hope you give us readers some detail about her powers soon! I'm really excited to see her become stronger. Thanks for a badass chapter!

I'm so anxious what'll happen next!!!! I'm dying with curiosity! Will she only end up together with one person? There's so many ways things can go its exciting how you'll write things. It'd be great if you even write an alternative ending when you're done with the story! I'm waiting with my full anticipation did your next chapter. Please keep up the amazing work I love your story!

I really loved Eden was reacting to Court in this chapter.And that she didn't give in to Court and has spoiled little brat ways. And I also liked how she told him off and let him know she's not weak like Lilly Anne and she's not her Lilly Anne period.YES!!! Gabriel picking her up and talking to her was just so perfect.He is so right for her.he doesn't force her to do any think she doesn't want and he doesn't act like a spoiled, entitled,nasty acting and disrespectful little punk like Court. He seems so kind and loving, he also seems very sad and lonely. Please let Eden at least mess around with Gabe I love how she is so attracted to him and he likes her to.But of course because of Julian and Court he can't be with her. What in the world did Court do to Eden? What ever it is please don't let her forgive him. He's gone way beyond to far now. Thanks

Loving the dailey updates