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Oh! Please do stay excited about this story, I am really enjoying it. I can't wait to see Court in action when he finally finds someone treating Eowyn badly, he's gonna be awesome! I really hope that you keep your enthusiasm, it always disappoints me when people find the courage to write something different and then get discouraged from lack of enthusiasm from others. If you ever find yourself feeling that its not worth it just remember there is at least one reader out there waiting eagerly for the next installment.

Give people some time.

This is surely a very unusual concept that I don't see often (in fact, I don't think I've read a story with that kind of plot idea before). Original.

Can't say more, for even though we are 4 chapters in there was not much content. It's intriguing, though. Keep it up :)

i really like you story please cont. to write it

Chapter 3

Little Eowyn is learning new things all the time, tasting new drinks and having to learn what boning is, and she is taking it all in stride. How strange is it that Court and Julian discuss the incest in the family so openly and unashamed. Where is Court's mom? I really hope we keep learning more about this family Julian became a father at 10 yrs old that is crazy how old was his sister (obviously older). Julian was much more fatherly in this chapter and a lot less lechery. Learning of Eowyn's mother's dead was a good bit of info.
Stupid or Brave which one is Eowyn for agreeing to go to school with a bunch a inbreed snobs, I do home they're not as awful as Annabelle (although it's always good to have a bitch to hate on). I felt so sad for her when she over heard Annabelle talk about her: “I’ll learn to talk better,” haven't we all felt inadequate at one time or another?
Not indulging Annabelle's temper tantrum was nice yeah Court is screwing her (his emotional feelings for her are unknown) but he still stood up for his sister and then comforted her. And the same for Julian he didn't stand for her childish behavior and tried his best to make Eowyn feel better. I said he was more fatherly except his hands lingered too long on her barely there waist.
Please explain how you are achieving this balancing act: Julian in age is much more adequate as a brother to Eowyn and especially Court. But somehow he comes across fatherly but not overbearingly shining example: He looked down at his son and took the glass from his hand. “Not before five Courtland,”.
And thanks for ending the chapter; leaving creepy Court in my head.

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Really liking the story thus far. I'm exited to see where you'll take it from here.

I'm really enjoying your story, and I hope you don't let it go.
The southern twist of it is really refreshing; and it takes a lot to impress me with incest.
Please continue! <3

Please stay excited! I am reading:-) I love it! I love your characters and the mystery. The clan, one of the blood, it's awesome. Almost like they're a coven or something without all the magic weirdness. It reminds me of one of my favorite authors (I think I told you that with the Briar story too). They were inbred mostly to keep the family pure as well. I loved that series until parts of it got too wonky for me, and this one is the perfect mix between that series that I adore it with your personal twists and turns which are amazing! Thank you and please don't give up on it, I am loving it! Much Love!

I'm reading and I notice you have a lot of hits too. I think this is such a taboo story people don't want to admit they are reading it. Its a dark story.... I hate the security code thing, that why I don't comment as much on site that have this.

Don't stop, I like the story! I can't review as much as I like so forgive me please! It's a dark story and I absolutely love to read dark stories. I loved your last one and I love this one too. Thank you for updating. I'll try to review more.

Sorry for not reviewing:( I'm a huge fan of your work and love the phrases you use. I love all your work (even though you delete stuff, which is bad).