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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man everyone except Julian and maybe Court doesn't show any resentment toward Eowyn because she is a half breed. It just blows my mind how they really separate themselves and think they are better than the tainted ones. Court is really bi-polar because he seems to want to ravish Eowyn raw as he said but then he seems to be conflicted because of their family teaching they were passed down through each generations. And she knows now that her uncle doesn't like her at because she is a half breed and seems to be keeping an eye on her since she got into a fight with his daughter. If you are still having some writer's block, I could help with some ideas! X3 I look forward to the next update!
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yea she can kick some ass. I love it. She is a strong woman.
Linda
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6
There are so many things that are drawing Eowyn to Court (and the audience as well), he shows her kindness then crudeness but in all he has peaked her curiosity. I really didn’t think any good would come from her going up to the attic, I mean when was the last time you heard of happy things happening in an attic (i.e.: Flowers in the Attic or Anne Frank ~ unhappy times). I am intrigued by the Gabriel but I fear he would have brought nothing but confusion and pain to Eowyn and she’s already adjusting to so much. I should hate Court for reading her diary but it was just so fitting and it gives him insight to her. I am desperate to know more about this Grandmother Josephine. I smiled as he was using her own words against her: “A real dick with a heart of coal,”-So smart! OMFG you took the words right out of my brain!!! When he says he should hate her…I so thought that’s how Eowyn should feel then she went and said the same thing!!!!
Damn couldn’t Eowyn get a few licks into Annabelle!? And I’m pretty sure I despise Annabelle’s father, I know she and Court are cousins so is her father his uncle? I would think they would have to be with the resemblance what with all the brother/cousins and Uncle/Daddys in this family who the hell knows. Yay for Eowyn for stick up for herself fuck them and their “law”.
Loved the way he said: “I will have my crimson eye on you,”-nice line to end with…
You know You Love Me, XoXo
There are so many things that are drawing Eowyn to Court (and the audience as well), he shows her kindness then crudeness but in all he has peaked her curiosity. I really didn’t think any good would come from her going up to the attic, I mean when was the last time you heard of happy things happening in an attic (i.e.: Flowers in the Attic or Anne Frank ~ unhappy times). I am intrigued by the Gabriel but I fear he would have brought nothing but confusion and pain to Eowyn and she’s already adjusting to so much. I should hate Court for reading her diary but it was just so fitting and it gives him insight to her. I am desperate to know more about this Grandmother Josephine. I smiled as he was using her own words against her: “A real dick with a heart of coal,”-So smart! OMFG you took the words right out of my brain!!! When he says he should hate her…I so thought that’s how Eowyn should feel then she went and said the same thing!!!!
Damn couldn’t Eowyn get a few licks into Annabelle!? And I’m pretty sure I despise Annabelle’s father, I know she and Court are cousins so is her father his uncle? I would think they would have to be with the resemblance what with all the brother/cousins and Uncle/Daddys in this family who the hell knows. Yay for Eowyn for stick up for herself fuck them and their “law”.
Loved the way he said: “I will have my crimson eye on you,”-nice line to end with…
You know You Love Me, XoXo
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is why I dislike WIPs, update soon please.
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! I was scared you'd lost your enthusiasm. I know it was only a couple days, but I kind of got used to seeing you update at least once a day. I am so addicted to this story that seeing a new update makes me all giddy. I'm glad you broke throught the writer's block and hope it doesn't trouble you ever again in your entire writing career (mostly because I know what a pain it can be and never want anyone to suffer through it). I love the two new chapters and am so excited to see where you're going to take it, especially with Court and Julian, but also with Gabriel, William and the Uncle. I really hope Eowyn gets to pound the snot out of Annabell though, and soon. That is one girl who needs to be taken down a few thousand pegs. Anyway, you're amazing and this story is totally addictive!
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love all the emotions she is feeling. I can't wait for your next chapter.
Linda
Linda
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wish Eowyn would date William instead of her brother. But she seems be attracted to the bad boy type.Julian seems like a descent guy(dad),it seems like
he wants to protect Eowyn from the family as much as he can.
he wants to protect Eowyn from the family as much as he can.
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February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Camp I just read the 5 chapters. I love the story. It is so interesting. You have another hit with this one. I can't wait for the next update.
Linda
Linda
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February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Decent chapter; good to see another side of Julian.
I might be a terrible person but I love Cortland. <3
Looking forward to anything else you feel like serving us!
I might be a terrible person but I love Cortland. <3
Looking forward to anything else you feel like serving us!
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February 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying the story and can't wait to see what happens next. I understand the review part because sometimes when you want to write but don't know if anyone is enjoying it, you find yourself taking a break.