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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just read it all in one sitting. great story, so suspenseful! I really like Eowyn, and I can't wait to see where you are giong with this! no need to be so self-critical, this is an addictive story!
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ALICE???? No way!! Omg this was one HELL of a chapter!!! My favorite line, maybe that I've ever read was "The kiss was like a flock of birds with torn wings taking to the air." That struck me straight in the chest and stayed there for the rest of the chapter and I dare say it will for the rest of the day.
I just can't believe Alice did that, but then again she wanted Court right? Bitch! Glad Micheal's dead! He just needed gone and in a great show of jealousy! That was great! I am bad once again by saying the damn chapter was frigging HOT. I could read you all day! Thanks for the update! Much Love!!!!
I just can't believe Alice did that, but then again she wanted Court right? Bitch! Glad Micheal's dead! He just needed gone and in a great show of jealousy! That was great! I am bad once again by saying the damn chapter was frigging HOT. I could read you all day! Thanks for the update! Much Love!!!!
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is like being on a drug that you can't get enough of. Cort is crazy and she is loving it.
Linda
Linda
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welp, Alice is a bitch.
Camp30, I'm getting so tired of checking back every five minutes for an update. :p won't you ease my troubled mind and spoil us; just a little more?
Camp30, I'm getting so tired of checking back every five minutes for an update. :p won't you ease my troubled mind and spoil us; just a little more?
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omygosh!!!! This story is just sooooo fabulous, I like it sooooo much, every time I log on I look for it. Keep up the great work, I am soooo looking forward to the next update. :D
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah (((((hugs))))) I'm here honey and I'm reading but my computer went finally and I am reading from my phone. I hate trying to review from my phone so I'm trying to do it when my kiddo visits with her lap top. It's keeping me from writing too which is making me a bit nutso!! I have filled four notebooks with notes for when I can finally afford a new comp! Okay that out of the way I am loving this story! I still can't pronounce Eowyn but I love the name btw if I haven't told you yet:) I am freaking about Court being gone then coming back like that! I am evil in wanting him back to claim his girl! Terrible, I know but it's going with the story so I don't care if it's bad! lol. I just hope it's the Butler guy, forgot his name read it awhile ago, and if it's his blood all over Court?? I'm rambling but have to catch up!! The kiss between them was melt worthy!! The choking...gotta say kinda hot!!! But now the duct tape?? All kinds of thoughts go through my naughty brain with THAT one!! IDK IDK IDK...so many ways you can go and all of them delicious!! Well unless one of the main characters doesn't make it! Anyway I am here, just a little computer deprived but I will try to give you more love!! Much Much love and thanks for the yumminess!!
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Camp I love it. This story has so much to it I can't wait for your updates. I think this is one of your best.
Linda
Linda
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
Okay this is my second time reading this chapter (I often do it if I don't write my review straight away), well I had to laugh when I (re)read Alice say: "What you need is a new beau", well then the first boy to ask her out is Beauregard (alright call me lame - whatevs, it was amusing to me). Ever so surprised that Court made it know Eowyn was off limits (does the sarcasm read thru?), what no public edict to the school forbidden all males from too long lingering looks onto Eowyn? Beau was a bit of a stuck up prick, eh?
Julian and Eowyn talking/bonding over breakfast is so needed, I am addicted to the Court and Eowyn scenes but Julian is so alluring and a man that can not be describe in a few words. He is loyal to his family (possibly to a fault; taking his son as his lover) but he is also his own man I know he will fight to protect Eowyn and he has fallen in love with her but not as a man and a woman but as a father and child. I think most parents fall in love with their children and its a pure (hopefully) uncorupted love. She feeling pride with her fathers words and thoughts of her were heart warming.
Accepting a date with Michal so she could prove to herself she didn't need Court probably wasn't the smartest thing to do, especially since he's an outsider but she has to be her own person. I know he's not the one but a little practice never hurt anyone (or will?).
Oh now can I address the end, Court making his reappearance, wearing blood and duct tape does not bode well for Eowyn.
In regards to your A/N we get the pleasure of reading you (and others) as these saga's unfold and we get to read them for free so I will keep paying you in pennies. Pennies for my thoughts; this was a solid chapter and that may sound insulting or bland but you reinforced Eowyn & Julian's relationship, Eowyn got to meet some boys oh and lest we forget the spectacular return of Court, I can't say I missed him because wherever Eowyn is so is he. He never verves far from her mind, body or even soul.
You Know You Love Me XoXo
Okay this is my second time reading this chapter (I often do it if I don't write my review straight away), well I had to laugh when I (re)read Alice say: "What you need is a new beau", well then the first boy to ask her out is Beauregard (alright call me lame - whatevs, it was amusing to me). Ever so surprised that Court made it know Eowyn was off limits (does the sarcasm read thru?), what no public edict to the school forbidden all males from too long lingering looks onto Eowyn? Beau was a bit of a stuck up prick, eh?
Julian and Eowyn talking/bonding over breakfast is so needed, I am addicted to the Court and Eowyn scenes but Julian is so alluring and a man that can not be describe in a few words. He is loyal to his family (possibly to a fault; taking his son as his lover) but he is also his own man I know he will fight to protect Eowyn and he has fallen in love with her but not as a man and a woman but as a father and child. I think most parents fall in love with their children and its a pure (hopefully) uncorupted love. She feeling pride with her fathers words and thoughts of her were heart warming.
Accepting a date with Michal so she could prove to herself she didn't need Court probably wasn't the smartest thing to do, especially since he's an outsider but she has to be her own person. I know he's not the one but a little practice never hurt anyone (or will?).
Oh now can I address the end, Court making his reappearance, wearing blood and duct tape does not bode well for Eowyn.
In regards to your A/N we get the pleasure of reading you (and others) as these saga's unfold and we get to read them for free so I will keep paying you in pennies. Pennies for my thoughts; this was a solid chapter and that may sound insulting or bland but you reinforced Eowyn & Julian's relationship, Eowyn got to meet some boys oh and lest we forget the spectacular return of Court, I can't say I missed him because wherever Eowyn is so is he. He never verves far from her mind, body or even soul.
You Know You Love Me XoXo
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February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So Court showed her fear that he could hurt her, possibly kill her and he did that to warn her that if she gets too attached to him then he would hurt her since he enjoys hurting girls. It is creepy that her uncle is watching her every move. I guess what he said to her was true, he is not taking his eyes off her. It is cruel that people that think that she doesn't belong with them and she should be killed because of who her mother was. I wonder what will happen now that her eighteenth birthday is there. I look forward to the next update!
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February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
Normally the structure of my review is in chronological order (for 2 reasons I read & review at the same time-mostly and I’m OCD), but I had to break the pattern to say I love, love Courtland! I knew when he embarrassed Annabelle by announcing she wants to blow him was his way to punish and shame her but I also knew it was his way to show Eowyn how awful he is and rubbing in her face that he took Annabelle on a cruise for her birthday. Then my suspicions were confirmed as he raced down thru the roads scaring Eowyn and finally confessing: “I had to protect you”. I wanted to cry for him. I need to stop or this review will just become a love letter to Court, LOL.
Thank God for William and Alice (I talk about her in a minute), some normalcy is Eowyn’s turned upside world. I hope William just likes Eowyn as a friend she doesn’t need another man trying to get into her pants; her “innocence” is already on borrowed time. How do I love Alice let me count the ways… she seem genuine (please let that be real)… and she doesn’t give a fuck about Family Law!
Oh and Eowyn meeting “the eye” she took it in stride she really is a tough little thing, oh and the saying “Charm a nun out from her habit”, I had never heard that before but it fits Court to a T. Wait did I forget the lecherous whisper “Soon you will be fucking me”, why am I not disgusted by that remark? She’s practically a child 13 to his 17 (I know she turns 14 in a week but still) not to mention he’s her brother (I know in this family that’s a bonus, they use reunions as speed dating).
All that being said I really liked this chapter and seems to be setting us for even greater things…
You know You Love Me, XoXo
Normally the structure of my review is in chronological order (for 2 reasons I read & review at the same time-mostly and I’m OCD), but I had to break the pattern to say I love, love Courtland! I knew when he embarrassed Annabelle by announcing she wants to blow him was his way to punish and shame her but I also knew it was his way to show Eowyn how awful he is and rubbing in her face that he took Annabelle on a cruise for her birthday. Then my suspicions were confirmed as he raced down thru the roads scaring Eowyn and finally confessing: “I had to protect you”. I wanted to cry for him. I need to stop or this review will just become a love letter to Court, LOL.
Thank God for William and Alice (I talk about her in a minute), some normalcy is Eowyn’s turned upside world. I hope William just likes Eowyn as a friend she doesn’t need another man trying to get into her pants; her “innocence” is already on borrowed time. How do I love Alice let me count the ways… she seem genuine (please let that be real)… and she doesn’t give a fuck about Family Law!
Oh and Eowyn meeting “the eye” she took it in stride she really is a tough little thing, oh and the saying “Charm a nun out from her habit”, I had never heard that before but it fits Court to a T. Wait did I forget the lecherous whisper “Soon you will be fucking me”, why am I not disgusted by that remark? She’s practically a child 13 to his 17 (I know she turns 14 in a week but still) not to mention he’s her brother (I know in this family that’s a bonus, they use reunions as speed dating).
All that being said I really liked this chapter and seems to be setting us for even greater things…
You know You Love Me, XoXo