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February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12
My heart was pounding as Julian ordering Court to undress Eowyn article by article of clothing and then he put a stop to this terrible act. Then Julian started his storytelling and my heart began to speed up again wondering how this all began. And what the hell di Court me “She died for you” you love leaving me with questions! Eowyn was thankful Court allowed her to comfort her as am I, he needs love and understanding but when he realizes her true love for him he physically and emotionally pushed her away. Him repeating the same thing he said after she asked about her boyfriend(“you hurt me”) was more how he is being hurt by loving her.
Seriously a cliffhanger like: Eowyn loading a gun, what good will come from it Eowyn? I can’t bare the death of Eowyn, Court or even Julian. And never has a truer thought been written in a diary: “Why can’t I love the right people?” haven’t we all thought that at least once?
You know you love me, XOXO
My heart was pounding as Julian ordering Court to undress Eowyn article by article of clothing and then he put a stop to this terrible act. Then Julian started his storytelling and my heart began to speed up again wondering how this all began. And what the hell di Court me “She died for you” you love leaving me with questions! Eowyn was thankful Court allowed her to comfort her as am I, he needs love and understanding but when he realizes her true love for him he physically and emotionally pushed her away. Him repeating the same thing he said after she asked about her boyfriend(“you hurt me”) was more how he is being hurt by loving her.
Seriously a cliffhanger like: Eowyn loading a gun, what good will come from it Eowyn? I can’t bare the death of Eowyn, Court or even Julian. And never has a truer thought been written in a diary: “Why can’t I love the right people?” haven’t we all thought that at least once?
You know you love me, XOXO
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February 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my how can she not be confused. I love the update.
Linda
Linda
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10.5
Why is it as soon as I think I'm done and hit review 10 things flash in my head on what I should have said??
Julian, I didn't realize how much I missed him until he left that note for Eowyn. I have come a custom to their budding relationship. Ad what is this "Blood Business" all about I fear it has to do with her?
Can I make a request... I would like a two for one special on ass kickings Annabelle & Alice the Twat Twins.
You Know You Love Me XoXo
Why is it as soon as I think I'm done and hit review 10 things flash in my head on what I should have said??
Julian, I didn't realize how much I missed him until he left that note for Eowyn. I have come a custom to their budding relationship. Ad what is this "Blood Business" all about I fear it has to do with her?
Can I make a request... I would like a two for one special on ass kickings Annabelle & Alice the Twat Twins.
You Know You Love Me XoXo
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
New here just read all 10chapters.
Wanted to tell you I'm now a huge fan of Touching Eden.
Please post more..
Wanted to tell you I'm now a huge fan of Touching Eden.
Please post more..
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February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Man I really hate Alice now because of her lies, Eowyn was raped by Court because he thought that she slept with someone else. Man he is has to get it through his head that she isn't like the stuck girls there. She does things different and she believes in taking time to get intimate with someone like she was doing with Michael. And now she is stuck with him for a week until Julian comes back. And Alice, man I really thought that Eowyn found someone she could be real friends and trust her but then Alice back stabbed Eowyn and now she is stuck with that crazy bastard. I am angry at Court because he is just takes and destroys things like he did that submissive Annabelle and now it seems he is trying to get Eowyn to submit to him. I really thought that Julian would be the one to take Eowyn first but of course COurt believes lies and just tore Eowyn apart. I wonder if she'll try not to become like Annabelle and try to escape the hell she is going through. I look forward to the next update!
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February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Such pain in a young girls heart. She deservers more than just her brother. I wonder if she will have the same desire for her father. Until the next chapter that I am looking of foward to.
Linda
Linda
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February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay I'm gonna kick him in the nuts! WTH does he think he's doing with Annabelle that skank still!? And where the hell did Julian go!? Omg you have me so on the damn edge of my seat now! LOVE IT!!! Damn the struggle that she is going through is so sweet and so hard! To be in love with your brother and pissed that he raped you then to still want to be near him and comparing herself to the way Annabelle worshipped him was just heartwrenching! Wow I wanted to cry for her and I love it that she wants to kick Alices ass. PLEASE detail that if you do have her do it. I mean every drop of damn blood that two faced backstabbing bitch!!! OKAY then, I got a little emotional about that but that is why I have so few girl friends!!!! haha ok enough ranting! Great chapter once again my good author! Bravo and please more!! Much Love!!
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February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10
I needed a nap after that emotional roller coaster you sent me on yesterday, but I'm rested and ready to review this new opus. I stand up and cheer for Eowyn allowing herself to wallow a bit but then promising to kick that scrawny bitches ass (okay I don't know if Alice is actually scrawny, I just thought that sounded good). To be so obsessed with a man who brutalized you, I feel like holding her and telling her everything will be alright but that would be a lie. I'm not sure if her loving Court will make her situation easier or harder in the current situation it definitely harder but possibly down the line it will become easier. If only Court could be strong enough to love Eowyn with out having to feel so protective of her then he wouldn't have to be so cruel to pushe her away from him. I just realize he really is a coward or more like a scared little boy who lashes out.
Terrific now she had Michal's death on her conscience, poor dear.
God he drives me madder than a hatter! He wakes up all sweet yet sexy and ruins it all in 3.3 seconds with his foul mouth, but damn do I love looking at that mouth "I fucked you raw"!!! And using her own words against her so deliciously evil. He is a sinister bastard. I knew when she orgasmed when he fucked her he would use that to advantage. Whether she came because it was an involuntary reaction or she actual achieved pleasure its not for him to use against her. She made him a fucking sandwich, I'm sorry I had to laugh she's in an impossible position. Court watches her while she is that incredibly endearing or sexy? I'm going with the latter.
Annabelle is merely a pet to him something that is there for his amusement or humiliation, does he even see her as a person or just a fuckhole? Eowyn is so devastated by Court still being with Annabelle, she hates him but loves him; wants him far away from her but can't let him go.
Please Eowyn, live above hell.
And wait there's more I got a shout out!! Seeing my name on a camp30 story makes me feel like John Grisham. My review is only as good as the author I'm reviewing. And you my dear give good story!
You Know You Love Me XoXo
I needed a nap after that emotional roller coaster you sent me on yesterday, but I'm rested and ready to review this new opus. I stand up and cheer for Eowyn allowing herself to wallow a bit but then promising to kick that scrawny bitches ass (okay I don't know if Alice is actually scrawny, I just thought that sounded good). To be so obsessed with a man who brutalized you, I feel like holding her and telling her everything will be alright but that would be a lie. I'm not sure if her loving Court will make her situation easier or harder in the current situation it definitely harder but possibly down the line it will become easier. If only Court could be strong enough to love Eowyn with out having to feel so protective of her then he wouldn't have to be so cruel to pushe her away from him. I just realize he really is a coward or more like a scared little boy who lashes out.
Terrific now she had Michal's death on her conscience, poor dear.
God he drives me madder than a hatter! He wakes up all sweet yet sexy and ruins it all in 3.3 seconds with his foul mouth, but damn do I love looking at that mouth "I fucked you raw"!!! And using her own words against her so deliciously evil. He is a sinister bastard. I knew when she orgasmed when he fucked her he would use that to advantage. Whether she came because it was an involuntary reaction or she actual achieved pleasure its not for him to use against her. She made him a fucking sandwich, I'm sorry I had to laugh she's in an impossible position. Court watches her while she is that incredibly endearing or sexy? I'm going with the latter.
Annabelle is merely a pet to him something that is there for his amusement or humiliation, does he even see her as a person or just a fuckhole? Eowyn is so devastated by Court still being with Annabelle, she hates him but loves him; wants him far away from her but can't let him go.
Please Eowyn, live above hell.
And wait there's more I got a shout out!! Seeing my name on a camp30 story makes me feel like John Grisham. My review is only as good as the author I'm reviewing. And you my dear give good story!
You Know You Love Me XoXo
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
You sure as hell know how to challenge a reviewer!
I want to hate Court I want to be disgusted by his brutality to not just a girl but his own sister, but somehow I feel the beating and rape was just as hard on him as it was on Eowyn. He was so blinded by hurt and rage. I could see his face so clearly; the look of betrayal and then there was a shift from him feeling betrayed by Eowyn's disloyalty to feeling he was the betrayer as forced himself thru her hymen, then knowing he was lied to.
That being said I still feel complete remorse for Eowyn first times are never easy and for your first time to be taken from you has to be indescribably awful. Making it all the more worse is she wanted to lose her virginity to him but not that way.
I did hate Court for a brief moment I was disgusted as I read him say “You could apologize for being a faithless slut,” he deserved the slap, I understand his hurt but verbally lashing out to her after brutalizing especially know what he thought was untrue was cruel.
Oh and do not get me started on Alice, she had Alice and William a grand total of 2 friends and one has sold her out for own conniving purposes (please make William be genuine). At least Court had the decency to feel sorrow and realizing Alice's wicked plot. Court was wonderful in those brief moments after the bath then he professes: "The next time will be wonderful sister,” but then again morphed back into asshole mode by forcing himself on her AGAIN.
How to describe the second rape? It most certainly started as a rape but as she felt her body enjoying what her mind had been imagining for weeks something switched and it became sex and near the end as close to making love as Court is capable of (at this time).
What Court did was wrong on so many levels but then why was it such a turn on and why did this scene leave me wanting more...
My favorite line: " He was a monster made to enchant."
You Know You Love Me XoXo
You sure as hell know how to challenge a reviewer!
I want to hate Court I want to be disgusted by his brutality to not just a girl but his own sister, but somehow I feel the beating and rape was just as hard on him as it was on Eowyn. He was so blinded by hurt and rage. I could see his face so clearly; the look of betrayal and then there was a shift from him feeling betrayed by Eowyn's disloyalty to feeling he was the betrayer as forced himself thru her hymen, then knowing he was lied to.
That being said I still feel complete remorse for Eowyn first times are never easy and for your first time to be taken from you has to be indescribably awful. Making it all the more worse is she wanted to lose her virginity to him but not that way.
I did hate Court for a brief moment I was disgusted as I read him say “You could apologize for being a faithless slut,” he deserved the slap, I understand his hurt but verbally lashing out to her after brutalizing especially know what he thought was untrue was cruel.
Oh and do not get me started on Alice, she had Alice and William a grand total of 2 friends and one has sold her out for own conniving purposes (please make William be genuine). At least Court had the decency to feel sorrow and realizing Alice's wicked plot. Court was wonderful in those brief moments after the bath then he professes: "The next time will be wonderful sister,” but then again morphed back into asshole mode by forcing himself on her AGAIN.
How to describe the second rape? It most certainly started as a rape but as she felt her body enjoying what her mind had been imagining for weeks something switched and it became sex and near the end as close to making love as Court is capable of (at this time).
What Court did was wrong on so many levels but then why was it such a turn on and why did this scene leave me wanting more...
My favorite line: " He was a monster made to enchant."
You Know You Love Me XoXo
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really!!! now you got me on the end of seat,and whose blood was on Courtland.