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I'm so confused lol.

I don't even know if it's a good kind of confused, like near the end everything will be like OHHHHH or I'll finish the book and still be like wut.

Anyway please update. c: Despite not knowing what's going on, I'm pretty addicted to this story.

Camp I am glad you are back. I have been gone for awhile also. I have been out of town. I was so happy to see the chapter. The story is coming full circle. I can't wait for more.
Linda

I've been waiting for an update, and I finally got one,a good one at that. Can't wait to read what Eden finds out about her aunt Court's mom.

I'm sorry to hear your struggling so to write.
Iv been reading this story since about three quatres of the way through your updates.
i can tell you i find this story utterly intoxicating and addictive. I look forward to the sunday morning currently when i can get up and read your lattest instalment.
Your descriptions are amazing and i feel as though i have the perfect image if Court, Julian and Eowyn in my head.
I love that Court has this amazing dark side yet complete lust/love for Eowyn. Id love to see more between Julian and Eowyn however, but something more along the lust she has Court towards Julian as well.
i love this beautiful dark world you are creating/have created. But you have also succeeded in making it seem so normal and very right.
So i beg, do not give up. AFF is a hard place to gain reviews or even fan base, especially in the original catergory.
Dont give up hope, you have something wickedly fantastic here.
Heres hoping next sunday will be brilliant too!

Yay you're back. Thank you for the new chapter. I've been looking forward to the new chapter.

Wow that was great..
I'm guilty of being a lurker to stories.
However i really enjoy your story.

I really like the story.
I wonder what's going to happen next and if Court will find her where she is than take the book of his mothers.
But is the book forshadowing?
Well I hope you will continue with this story and post more soon

I can't believe how sick this story is, I shouldn't even be reading it and it DEFINITELY shouldn't excite me...

Well Julian never ceases to surprise does he? He knew about "the outsider" and knew Court killed him? Dying to know what spawn he took care of. You surely know where to leave a chapter off to make me squirm!!! Love it!!! Please may I have some more?? Much Love!!! Off to review your my other addiction!!

Chapter 11
Yeah The Butler Saga continues!
Court is really changing even though he is fighting it. He accuses Eowyn of hurting him yet is he who hurts her at every chance he can, he does it to protect himself this family has been taught to seek each other for sex but not to love. I fell in love with Court when he suggested they date (I have lusted for him before then), Eowyn is in such a hard position she has been recently beaten and raped but she was also in love with her rapist oh yeah and it’s her brother, I applauded her self-analysis and shows she has not been brainwashed by this family.
The Father returns presumably killing a Halfling? I was surprised that Julian suggest they all get drunk but then I have to remind myself he has only be an adult for a short time. I was also surprised by Julian’s confession: “Would that she was a touch older we could both share in her,”, how old does she have to be? Have Julian & Court shared lovers before? Maybe I’m terribly naïve (or stupid or blinded by my love) but I believe Court doesn’t want to share Eowyn because he feels he owns her but because he know how the rape of her father would do to her, he can explain away his rape of her because she already lusted after him and was on her way to falling in love with her. How cruel was it for Julian to order his son to strip his sister to ready her for her rape by her own father.
Word wise maybe this is light but it is certainly not light in content!

You know you love me, XOXO