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March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
CH 20
Let me start with something I wanted to say in my previous review (it wasn't specific to ch 19), Court obviously has issues he needs to learn patients and learn how to be considerate of others especially Eowyn BUT Eowyn has to realize how he was raised (and he's not much older than a child), he can't change over night, now it does not excuse his treatment and rape of her but it does explain. I know I sound like a dumb bunny but I'm not I'm looking at this from all angles.
Okay now onto chapter 20; I think I like it better that Court sat there with Eowyn & Gabe instead of going off and beating the ever livin' shit out of him. How much meaning you can express in such simple mundane words: “I made this for you,”. My heart doubled in size with that and what a natural true reaction Eowyn had by being irritated by his thoughtfulness. Watching Eowyn's inner struggle wanting to defy Court but wanting to be with him but also wanting to stay in school to continue her education was suspenseful. I am happy she refused him, education is so important to her and its one more step for her to take to belong with the Butler's now that being said my heart wept for Court finally asking for what he wanted instead of taking what he wanted was an achievement.
Two characters in this chapter who's motives are in question Rachelle, is she true and remorseful of her shenanigans? Then Gabe what is he about? He is the Evil-Alice's brother but that doesn't necessarily condemn him to her actions but then Julian at the end warning Eowyn against Gabe that he's not safe WTF is that about? Is Julian jealous or is he a cautious father? Why do you leave me with all these questions??? Going to Gabe & Alice's house was a nice glimpse at other Butler's how different their's is from Julian's; the conversation between Eowyn and Gabe did not help me at all with my suspicions of Gabe but that's not to say I didn't learn a lot and I definitely enjoyed it.
Maybe a good way to ease the tension between Gabe & Court is for the them to all have a fuck fest Court, Eowyn & Gabe but then Julian would be jealous... aw fuck it he can join in too, I'm sure he can "squeeze" in there somewhere?
Another goodie!
Let me start with something I wanted to say in my previous review (it wasn't specific to ch 19), Court obviously has issues he needs to learn patients and learn how to be considerate of others especially Eowyn BUT Eowyn has to realize how he was raised (and he's not much older than a child), he can't change over night, now it does not excuse his treatment and rape of her but it does explain. I know I sound like a dumb bunny but I'm not I'm looking at this from all angles.
Okay now onto chapter 20; I think I like it better that Court sat there with Eowyn & Gabe instead of going off and beating the ever livin' shit out of him. How much meaning you can express in such simple mundane words: “I made this for you,”. My heart doubled in size with that and what a natural true reaction Eowyn had by being irritated by his thoughtfulness. Watching Eowyn's inner struggle wanting to defy Court but wanting to be with him but also wanting to stay in school to continue her education was suspenseful. I am happy she refused him, education is so important to her and its one more step for her to take to belong with the Butler's now that being said my heart wept for Court finally asking for what he wanted instead of taking what he wanted was an achievement.
Two characters in this chapter who's motives are in question Rachelle, is she true and remorseful of her shenanigans? Then Gabe what is he about? He is the Evil-Alice's brother but that doesn't necessarily condemn him to her actions but then Julian at the end warning Eowyn against Gabe that he's not safe WTF is that about? Is Julian jealous or is he a cautious father? Why do you leave me with all these questions??? Going to Gabe & Alice's house was a nice glimpse at other Butler's how different their's is from Julian's; the conversation between Eowyn and Gabe did not help me at all with my suspicions of Gabe but that's not to say I didn't learn a lot and I definitely enjoyed it.
Maybe a good way to ease the tension between Gabe & Court is for the them to all have a fuck fest Court, Eowyn & Gabe but then Julian would be jealous... aw fuck it he can join in too, I'm sure he can "squeeze" in there somewhere?
Another goodie!
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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love the new powers she is coming into. I hope she will be able to teach some of her extended family members a thing or two. Great chapter.
Linda
Linda
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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
CH 18
I think Eowyn is most definitely a Butler now, she is learning to manipulate Court and she should exact the little power she has (but I suspect she has more powers than anyone knows). This is the first chapter I think we get a complete Eowyn, she’d got her Bayou background and she’d not this scared little girl anymore the old and new Eowyn have truly merged (and Annabelle and Alice better beware!). William is so sweet and I like how tore she feels lying to him. I know Annabelle meant to sound all big and bad proclaiming “And I mean to find out.” But to me she just sounded sad and pathetic, bitch you lost fair and square move on! Eowyn standing up to Court fro dusting crumbs onto the ground was great; I am a lover of his but he needs her to put him in his place. That’s why I think Eowyn should be with Court over Gabriel (even though he seems to be great rival) he needs to become a better man for himself and for her instead of the self-indulgent brat he is currently. I very much enjoyed the interaction (and kiss) between Gabe and Eowyn, I hope he is better than his sister and if they strike up a friendship maybe we’ll know more about the strife between him and Court. How great was it when Court slammed his breaks and raged about Gabe and Eowyn, I practically squealed in delight. Then again standing up to him this time claiming her independence!
Thanks for the inner dialogue of Eowyn contemplating why/how all the Butlers aren’t slack-jawed-yokles, don’t we all think that inbreeding caused mental retardation or double heads? I’ve been researched there isn’t all that much evidence to support it (I’m not saying we should all start screwing our family members but it is curious).
It is a subtle chapter but I love when you do subtle it seems more is revealed in those chapters but we just don't know it at the time.
And again thanks for the shout out! I want to do my own shout out thanks to any and all reviewers of this work (and other works), it’s the least we can all do to show our love and support!
I think Eowyn is most definitely a Butler now, she is learning to manipulate Court and she should exact the little power she has (but I suspect she has more powers than anyone knows). This is the first chapter I think we get a complete Eowyn, she’d got her Bayou background and she’d not this scared little girl anymore the old and new Eowyn have truly merged (and Annabelle and Alice better beware!). William is so sweet and I like how tore she feels lying to him. I know Annabelle meant to sound all big and bad proclaiming “And I mean to find out.” But to me she just sounded sad and pathetic, bitch you lost fair and square move on! Eowyn standing up to Court fro dusting crumbs onto the ground was great; I am a lover of his but he needs her to put him in his place. That’s why I think Eowyn should be with Court over Gabriel (even though he seems to be great rival) he needs to become a better man for himself and for her instead of the self-indulgent brat he is currently. I very much enjoyed the interaction (and kiss) between Gabe and Eowyn, I hope he is better than his sister and if they strike up a friendship maybe we’ll know more about the strife between him and Court. How great was it when Court slammed his breaks and raged about Gabe and Eowyn, I practically squealed in delight. Then again standing up to him this time claiming her independence!
Thanks for the inner dialogue of Eowyn contemplating why/how all the Butlers aren’t slack-jawed-yokles, don’t we all think that inbreeding caused mental retardation or double heads? I’ve been researched there isn’t all that much evidence to support it (I’m not saying we should all start screwing our family members but it is curious).
It is a subtle chapter but I love when you do subtle it seems more is revealed in those chapters but we just don't know it at the time.
And again thanks for the shout out! I want to do my own shout out thanks to any and all reviewers of this work (and other works), it’s the least we can all do to show our love and support!
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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why!!! Why!!!! you always leave off with theses cliffhangers that I love and hate.I really love the way that Eden is treating Court. He deserves more of it.He claims he loves her so much,but he couldn't stop the "family" from taking the memories of the first five years of her life.Eden and Gabriel are so good together. And he's way more sexier than Court and is not an arrogant entitled disrespect asshole like Court. What I also like is how Eden called Court out about not having choice in helping her.She let him know you always have a choice. There was nothing he could say because he knows shes right. Awesome update. Can't wait for next one.
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March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this last chapter she was a little more spunky! I adore Court, but man up dude. Gotta light a fire under his ass.
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March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am back again Camp. I was out of the state. I hate they took her 5 years. I do think our girl is going to be a force to be reconed with. I love the update.
Linda
Linda
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March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I followed you here from Fanfiction and TWCS. Glad to see you are writing again. I miss your sexy, dark stories. You certainly have a way with the whole creepy, deep south, bayou thing. I still haven't quite figured out what the Butlers are yet, so I hope you give us more information soon. Keep writing!
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March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I kind of hate Julian
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March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Im really enjoying what your putting down. Im feeling a little of buetiful creatures here. Im waiting for the fire to light her up and her to set someone ablaze. I was waiting for some how the gost of the Mother that Line to come and save her in the grave yard. because i somehow feel as if she is her reborn. I might be totaly wrong. that was a way hot moment with fater and son as well. Im also waiting to see what was going on with the male cousin. The one where he had that odd moment with his sister. do siblings have somekind of mental conection where they can nonverbaly talk? Oh well more sooon i hope
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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am not into incest stories, but I do like this one. The plot and the newfound powers is quite fascinating. I do hope you continue with this. I know how frustrating and disheartening it can be when you write a story and no one gives you any reviews. For that, I am sorry. Hardly anyone has given my stories any reviews either and, like you, I have worked very hard on them. Please know that you at least have one fan of your writing. Have a great day.