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Chapter 1-7. Not sure if I left any reviews, so here I am! I'm excited to see what the outcome of Oliver's changes will do to him. Curious as to his new companion and how long their adventure as a duo will last. I'm looking forward to more updates! Keep up the awesome writing.

Ooh the scratches... they must have the most interesting story to tell!
I liked very much the comment "like a bag of patatoes, of magical patatoes". nice touch.
Looking forward to your next update :)

mmm.. Ch.7 was the most informative so far ;P
I forgot to write down in my previous review that I also liked the image werewolf-crow at the end of the chapter. I didn't expect a half-wolf to be compared to a winged animal. :D
I'm waiting to comment about the protagonists because I'd like first to make a more definite opinion of them.
p.s. I noticed some 'glair' instead of 'glare'. :)

I like it,more Please!!!!!

The story looks promising. You got my attention from the first chapter. Was the spell caste by Oliver like something that can make him teleport or change the time? I'm really impatient to read the next chapters.

You totally should update soon. The 4th chapter made me hungry for more. I wander what will he meet in his way and by the way I didn't like his relationship with the servant that much because when I first read about Oliver, I saw him with someone great; someone who have so much power. A person that as much as Oliver want to leave, he will be drown to him. Maybe even someone who will be the first to make him submit in bed.