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Who knew there were classes in whip handling? Lol

Interesting chapter in more ways than one. Especially w/David's use of his safe word. :)

I'm still trying to get a handle on David. Just what is he really? Part of me feels sorry for him, but part of me doesn't quite trust him. I'm anxious to see where you take him next.

Another chapter so soon! That was a pleasant surprise!! And it was a hot one :D
I'm glad Callum was in the mood to 'play' with David and tried to understand his need for masochism. And I hope Callum can show David that loving him doesn't need chains or whips. Let's see how this relationship works (but I suspect more drama is coming, not that I compalin :D)

OMG, David said 'I love you'! Too bad this doesn't really serve a purpose except to tease me and Callum lol. I knew something was fishy when you updated so fast but that's okay. I see what you did there --brought Jamie up briefly to talk about his and David's um...relationship? Anyways, I'm happy for the update on him. Boy, David can he a stalker when he wants lol.

I think you did good despite what you say about your skills. It wasn't too graphic but it was enough to have good visual. Speaking of which, how exactly would a person punish David. I mean he gets off on BDSM and stuff so what would you do? Like...not give him any nookie? This is legitimate question, Dead, by the way even though I'm laughing as I type.

Anyways, you know I always look forward to updates from you. XD

This is such great story! I read everything in one sitting! I love Callum and David together!

But I'm a bit worried that you're planning to end this story with a sad ending because there was this one sentence that stood out---"I never did exactly find out what made David tick." It makes me feel like David is gonna free himself from Sharp but also disappear from Callum's life.

But I hope I'm wrong! Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease let Callum and David be happy together in the end!!

So Callum is in the spiderweb again. Let's hope David is honest enough this time, I think he really cares for Callum despite all.
And let's hope Mr Sharp doesn't go ballistic now :D

lol I guess I did win (for now) but that's okay! David seems to have felt guilty enough for all his ass-y moments...or maybe he's tricking me and Callum again but oh well, Me and Callum forgive him...again. I laughed at Sharp, or rather, at what Callum said to Sharp. Take your foolish games elsewhere --that goes for you too David! How dare Sharp, thinking that after he threw poor David out, he would just come running back!...Well, that's a good argument but not anymore, darn it! It's about time David starts to put his foot down!

Speaking of which, what happened to Jamie? Is he and David going to make up? Or did they in a previous chapter and I can't remember and I'm too lazy to go back and check? Hm, can't remember...Oh well, you know how I love this story so I don't need to say it constantly lol

Ah, what a mess! David really got abused by Sharp and readily goes back to him, knowing full well that Sharp will probably add more pain to David's sore butt.

And no one is immune to David; Clive helps him, Callum helps him....

I'm sure that Callum was shocked to think that David thought of him so intimately just after one day; enough to draw such a beautiful portrait.

And whoa! They are going to let Sharp continue with the Poseidon, (did I spell that right? It doesn't look right), project knowing that it very well may pollute the waters and the fish?

This was a very interesting chapter Dead! :)

Just when I try not to feel bad for David I read a chapter like this. I feel for him but he plays mind games and how can you trust someone like that? I really think that he has a good heart and he just needs someone who can deal with everything he is and has done. Sharp "owns" him in a way but does he really love him? I know from reading this story that David plays games and gives people the person they want to see -- it's because of this that I don't think David is really into the BDSM lifestyle. He feels he needs Sharp and he'll do whatever he can to keep him but maybe he was thinking that someone could help him get out of Sharps clutches (for lack of a better word). He had said Callum was just like the others so we might be led to believe that he has tried and failed to find someone. I understand that Callum has had enough of the lies and the games but perhaps he can finally get David to a safe enough place where he can find himself again without leaning on anyone.
OMGoodness I was not expecting Warren as the man before Sharp -- very good twist.
I love where this story is going! Can Callum find the real David so they can find happiness together or is it to late for love?

Oh that last part broke my heart :( but now I'm sure there's hope for David and Callum will not give up on him. But David's life is more and more complicated.