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Well, well, well - look at what we have here... a baby? Can it be Davids? He says no but we all know he lies but then again maybe this time he's telling the truth. He seems sincere about loving Callum but you never know with him. I'm glad that Callum is standing up for himself and not just taking everything David says as the almighty truth. I can't wait to read what happens next! If I didn't know better I would think this whole thing was some sort of plan that David has come up with to make sure the Poseidon project gets off the ground but that doesn't make sense right now. Me and my theories can get carried away sometimes. Anyway, I was always a fan of David. First as a character you love to not trust and now I love David for the character that he's becoming even though you still might not be able to trust him. Sharps wife is something else - sneaky doesn't even begin to describe her and we only just met her. I wonder if Callum is going to talk to Jane about her findings or if he's going to let on about what he knows at the meeting? I hope he gets the answers he's looking for from David but with him - everything is always a half truth. I am loving David and Callum together forever on a farm herding sheep but we haven't gotten any indication of how long their relationship is/was. I also wonder if something happened with a college professor of Davids to make him drop out and change so much from the friend Jamie knew to the pushy sub he is know? Callum was trying to figure out what happened to him in school before college but he never thought to ask about what happened during.
Ok.. I am just rambling now - I guess I was in review withdrawal hehe...

OMG, David is always makes me love/hate him. Ugh, but...I'm sensing a climax to the story approaching! Ooooh, I can't wait for it! Anyways, this chapter was oddly...interesting. I can't explain it; probably because while I do like me some smex, I also love an intriguing story. Callum's approaching his limit (poor baby) and I'm, as always, on the edge of my seat. XD Keep it going!

Some more information about David past live as a drug addicted and again Sharp made clear that he's no going to let David free so easily. Callum job is jeopardized for real. But I'm most shocked at the fact that David is so indifferent and unconcerned about the things Sharp told and showed Callum. I'm afraid again that he's manipulating Callum for his own benefit but at the same time I can't help loving his character ;)

I had so many grammatical errors in that last review that I'm ashamed lol.

Anyways, maybe Sharp...isn't so bad. I still have a distaste for him but I understand now why David is so dependent on him. Both of them have issues they need to sort out. I just loved it when Callum was like "David to me he loved me." and then Sharp got mad; I could just imagine the look he had on his face. It was funny and I love stuff like that!

But to more important things: David said 'I love you'! While they were both awake and not in the haze of passionate, kinky sex! I'm so happy! And David's starting to understand who's the hero and who's sorta the zero! Yay! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my name? Well, there's this video game called Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 4 that I just absolutely love/loved and there's this nameless protagonist that you get to name. The video game has a manga based off of it and the protag's name in it is Souji Seta. Well, he's my favorite character and I "luv" him so...SoujiSetaLuver.

And no, lol, I haven't written anything because...well, I have ideas but they're too scattered to be put into words lol. But I might try, sometime soon actually. Your story actually gives me some inspiration, though it may not be as good as yours. And no I'm sucking up, lol, your story (to me) is genuinely entertaining.

Anyways, I understand about what you're going through with this story. It's trying to finish something all the way through and update it at a decent pace. There are plenty of stories that I can name that I'm patiently waiting to be updated and yours is the only one I actually know hopefully that it'll be updated within a comfortable margin of time.

I'm through doting on you now lol. I'm glad Jamie and David made up and I actually think, in a way, it's a good thing that Jamie left. I can't explain why but it's a good thing. I'm assuming that explaining what happened with David would have a) revealed too much or b)taken to type, in which it was a good idea to summarize it because that's a problem I have when writing. I go into too much detail lol. At any rate, this review has gone on for a while and I need to cut it short.

Callum and I approve of this chapter. XD

I hope Jamie still gets in touch with David and Callum...And that end, poor David :(

Dammit Dead! Now I have to wait to find out what happened to David!

This was an interesting chapter. So David's not 'in love' with Sharp; he just loves how Sharp dominates him and takes care of him. They're both enablers. :)

OMG More drama is coming yeah!!!
So Callum is going to find out some 'secrets' of David's past...I'm more than intrigued.
The more Callum knows the more he can do to help David...or the more he's getting into more trouble.
And of course I'm enjoying this story A LOT <3

Thanks for answering that question. You know, I figured it would be something like that lol. I wanted to know because I'm a filthy pervert and I'm proud!

Anyways, Jamie sounded pretty ticked. Ooooohhh, I wonder what happened? You left us at another cliff-hanger but I can't be mad about it lol. If you didn't, I'd probably get bored. But I'm not and I love this story so don't take it away from me T_T! *Ahem* I bet Callum is pretty happy that David and he are spending so much time together but you know lol.

Oh and another question. You don't have to tell me if it's a surprise or something but are you planning on doing another story after this one? I'd love to see more of your stuff. And no I haven't been to your author's page yet because I always forget. I'm going right now! XD

Where have I besn that I missed two updates? Oh yeah sick in bed.

So david has Callum wrapped around his little finger now. What's gonna happen if Sharp decides he wants David all weekend?

Ok on to the next update.