rate_review Reviews

I just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading and loving your story! It looks like I might be right on the whole college situation ;)

I'm happy to read another chapter so soon!
I loved the way Callum described David's parents. And now I'm very intrigued to know about this teacher that made David doubt of his artist talents.

Sharp is so confident, it's scary.

David pleads his case with Sharp, but Sharp makes it sound like David has no idea what he wants. He thinks he knows, but whatever he thinks, is wrong. Sharp is the only one who knows the "real" David and he's the only one who can ultimately help him. It's really enough to make Callum doubt himself and his abilities. But he doesn't. He stands right up to Sharp. That's impressive.

Looking forward to Callum meeting David's parents. That should be fun. lol :)

Aww, I didn't review the last chapter before you posted a new one. I'm sorry :( But...I'm still wary of Jamie, at this point. But if David says it can't be him...then all the more reason to suspect him. Sharp's being a prick, as per usual, but I have a bad feeling that Sharp is right and David might run back to him...I hope not. Or atleast if he does, he'll realize that Callum is the winner and they should be together.

I'm certainly still interested in this story ! But I was affraid it wouldn't be updated again :D I hate when a good story disappear or stop being written..
Well I don't want to think taht Jamie has anything to do with David recent mess...I'm as perplexed as Callum.

Jeez, why would Jamie be involved in all of this? I thought he was always trying to help David? Why on earth would he set David up in some flea-bag motel? And who was the other guy with them? I'm assuming it was Sharp...

Glad you're back!

I wonder if it is really Jamie ! Can't wait for your next chapter. =)

Glad you're back!

I wonder if it is really Jamie ! Can't wait for your next chapter. =)

Hm, I wonder what happened to him in that hotel room...? Oh well! Callum is, like, perpetually suspicious of David, which is kinda funny and kinda sad at the same. And, yeah, he was under some major pressure from all sides but he brought it on himself (in a way). Speaking of which, him and Jamie...they're making me suspicious. I know Jamie has a girlfriend and David has Callum/Sharp and I know they've been through a lot and supported each other...but, uh, I don't know. It makes me want to lift one eyebrow in questioning lol. But I'm probably reading too far into it...Please tell me I am lol

I can't wait to find out what David's up to now.

Convenient that he took that drug, now he doesn't remember anything.

And HE was the one who told Parkland, that's really interesting. At least that worked out to be in Callum's favor.

Great chapter! :)