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by DeadLetterOffice

schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Callum, good luck with that. Sharp is making sure no one gets in the way of Davdid's "rehabilitation".

What a horrible man that Duprey is. He was so cruel to David and I'm sure David wasn't the only one.

Terrific chapter Dead! I'm so glad you're back! :)
person Cecilia
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy to read another chapter! I really love this story.
I'm sorry to hear that you had a 'writter block', let's hope it's over :D
Interesting chapter...poor David (again)
person SoujiSetaLuver
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw...no David in this chappie. I'm glad you finally updated and I'm sorry you have a writer's block. But now we've gotten to the roots of David's problems buuuut...unfortunately, David's at the clinic and can't be contacted by anyone. I hope he doesn't become completely...taken (?) away from Callum. Sad face...
person Jess
schedule June 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it!!!
person SoujiSetaLuver
schedule June 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was very insightful :) I now trust Jamie again and I'm glad to know that I won't have to disown Callum for sleeping with Dana :)I don't feel so depressed anymore lol. Plus, the image of Dana in superman pajamas is adorable. Can't wait for more chapters!
schedule June 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, that last line from Jamie says it all. lol He can't give David up either. Loved the fuckwit comment: Callum's the biggest fuckwit he ever had the misfortune of meeting. Or something to that effect. It had me cracking up. :)

Now Callum's gonna flirt with Duprey, b/c Duprey's a sleaze and maybe Duprey will offer to put Callum seductively on a wall. Just sayin'...

This was a very interesting chapter Dead! :)
person Angel
schedule May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to not see where this goes honestly.
schedule May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Callum is right, David has to confront his past and learn to deal with it, otherwise he'll never be free from it. All Sharp wants to do is control him and have him all to himself.

Callum should not have pushed David to talk, especially since he just got out of the hospital. He should have waited until David was in a better mind-set. And then if David didn't want to talk about it, Callum shouldn't push him. Maybe one day he'll tell him on his own. But he definitely needs therapy, not with Wilson, but someone reputable. :) He really needs to talk about his demons and doing so with a neutral party might be for the best.
person Cecilia
schedule May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG That was breathtaking! Poor Callum, David has 'escaped' again...and with Sharp.
I'm looking forward next chapter!
person SoujiSetaLuver
schedule May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I knew it! I'm, like, literally depressed right now. No, seriously, I am. I bet Callum's gonna...sleep with someone...and then David's gonna be like "*Gasp*Callum, how could you!?!1!?" and then I'm gonna feel even worse you're gonna leave it at a cliff-hanger...Damn it... :(