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by DeadLetterOffice

person Jess
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omgosh! Has David finally lost it and decided to kill Duprey or maybe himself and Duprey? I wonder how this story is going to tie together with Sharp and the Poseidon project..?

I'm glad this story is back and I hope everyone gets a happily ever after of some sort.
person Cecilia
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A great surprise! Another chapter :D Yes, I'm still interested in this story.
I can't help loving David despite all...And I hope the bad news is that Duprey is now swimming in the ocean :)
schedule October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dead!!! You're back!!!! :) :)

So...the headlines: someone was arrested? Sharp Industries came crashing down b/c of Poseidon? (did I spell that right?)

I can't wait to find out! :)

Thanks for coming back, Dead! I missed this story.
person Jess
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I missed this story!
schedule August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
David is absolutely losing it. Why the hell would he want to go back to the one person wo fucked up his whole life? He needs more therapy. lol

I was wondering if Jane has something on Sharp. Is that why he sent her to DC? And she was being so cryptic to Callum. What did she mean by all her talk of Callum being naive?

This was a terrific chapter! :)
person SoujiSetaLuver
schedule August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow so we get to the heart of the problem: David still loves Duprey. Well...that kinda sucks lol. Maybe if they see each other, David might get over him. I say "might" very, very loosely, as with this story, things always get difficult and I always end up pissed lol But that's okay because drama FTW :)
person Cecilia
schedule August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy to see the story back!!!
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dead, you're back!!!! Yay!!!! I'm so glad that little 'push' helped you! :) Thanks for the shout-out! lol

I was thinking that Parkland wants to go thru with the deal b/c he's planning on suing Sharp. If he goes along with the company, and then problems start happening to his company, he can sue Sharp and put Sharp out of business. Kinda snarky if you ask me, and he really did seem like a nice guy, so I don't know. It's the only thing I could think of. lol

Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Thanks again, Dead! =)
person SoujiSetaLuver
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you finally updated! I thought the chapter was pretty good; It filled me with a sense of...calm? I can't really explain it...I guess it's because I've been without you and Callum for so long lol but I'm patiently waiting for any chapters you put up :)
schedule July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dead - are you ok????

I hope everything is all right with you and your long absence is only due to writer's block and nothing to do with your health...

I miss reading about Callum and Co. :(

I hope you come back soon, Dead. =) You're a terrific writer and I'd hate to see the story abandoned.