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by DeadLetterOffice

person Cecilia
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that finally David is coming clean ;)

And now I'm very intrigued...What's David planing?
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just finished the first chapter, really enjoying it so far. The characters actually seem like real people.
person Cecilia
schedule November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was intense. But finally David is coming clear...
schedule November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was interesting to read the chapter in David's pov.

It's so sad to see how far down he can spiral. But then again, Duprey got him started on his downward spiral a long time ago.

I really hope he can pick up the pieces and stay away from everything (drugs), and everyone (Clive, Dr. Wilson...), that are bad for him.
person Cecilia
schedule November 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm so nervous right now :D What's David going to say?
schedule November 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dead!!!! You're killing me here!!!!

I wanna know what David's gonna say!!!!!

At least the whole Poseidon thing was explained. And it makes sense.

Ok, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. =)
person Cecilia
schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well the moment of truth approaches. Who is David going to choose?
That final line: OMG Is Jamie in love with David?

I'm really happy to read another chapter.
person Jess
schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Who will David choose and will that person be able to handle him in the end? I've had some thoughts about Jamie being in love with David throughout the story but never really considered anyone other than Callum ending up the winner of this love story. I guess we'll find out soon.
schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Say what???? lol

Jesus, does Jamie know he's in love with David? Apparently everyone else except for Callum knows! lol

But yet another obstacle for Callum. Sharp, Jamie...

I really didn't think Dana would act the way she did. I mean just walking out of there - why? Her ego was bruised that much? I didn't even realize she liked Callum as much as that little stunt indicated.

Great chapter, Dead! :) Glad asshole Duprey is still alive - hopefully he'll be sent to the big house to be Big Bubba's beyotch. :)
schedule November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To me it seems like David was planning on doing something to Duprey. What could he do with his own handerchief? Choke him? Chloroform (if he had any), him? And how the hell does Sharp know what David's going to do?

Damn, this just keeps getting better and better, Dead! :)