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November 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very good ending - I loved the story! I can't wait to see what you have next for us.
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November 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg, Dead, I'm crying! This was such a PERFECT ending! I'm ecstatic that Callum and David wound up getting married.
So happy that Gile was Dana's fiancee! lol And Jane walking in on Callum and David once again going at it was hysterical! lol ;)
What a terrific story! I'm really gonna miss these boys. Even Sharp, if you can imagine that! lol
So happy that Gile was Dana's fiancee! lol And Jane walking in on Callum and David once again going at it was hysterical! lol ;)
What a terrific story! I'm really gonna miss these boys. Even Sharp, if you can imagine that! lol
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November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no :( I wasn't expecting that.
(I still have hope for Callum though)
(I still have hope for Callum though)
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November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Poor Callum. I even felt bad for Sharp. How sad to see him with someone else but what did they expect? Dana seems to have gotten colder - for her to smile while there hearts broke all over again was cruel but maybe that was payback for Callum not going after her.?. I really hope that everyone (including the readers lol) get a happy ending but from the beginning I was a little doubtful that Callum and David would make it. I guess I still have hope.
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November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this story since chapter 1. I have never reviewed anything. Ever. I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO US?! I really want David and Callum to be together! I check this site every day for an update of this story!
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November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love this work. i really like to read it for its plot more than the sexy scenes (imagine that) but that doesn't mean i don't like the sexy scenes any less. :)
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November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It sounds like it's about to get a little sad. I wonder what the real truth behind David's story is? I have a feeling that Callum is right and David is a great manipulator. Still loving your story!
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November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 36: I can't believe I missed this one! lol
I bet the girl's a masseuse or a fashion designer or something and helped David with whatever he's planning.
I'm actually proud of David for coming clean to the cops. But as Callum was thinking, it's hard to know if David knew all along he would get away with it and confessing would only look better for him.
But why did he wait a month to contact Callum? And where the hell was Sharp? Is Sharp in on this too? Did David choose Callum and has Sharp been licking his wounds for a month? I did love his confession of unconditional love though. :)
Ok, on to the next chapter.
I bet the girl's a masseuse or a fashion designer or something and helped David with whatever he's planning.
I'm actually proud of David for coming clean to the cops. But as Callum was thinking, it's hard to know if David knew all along he would get away with it and confessing would only look better for him.
But why did he wait a month to contact Callum? And where the hell was Sharp? Is Sharp in on this too? Did David choose Callum and has Sharp been licking his wounds for a month? I did love his confession of unconditional love though. :)
Ok, on to the next chapter.
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November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dead!!! I can't believe you left it like that!!!!
Was that David's way of breaking up with Callum? What's going on? Is he still w/Sharp? Loved Amanda, btw! lol
I hope you update soon. I'm on pins and needles now.
Was that David's way of breaking up with Callum? What's going on? Is he still w/Sharp? Loved Amanda, btw! lol
I hope you update soon. I'm on pins and needles now.
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November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so hot!!!
But so sad at the end :(
But so sad at the end :(