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your cliffs are steep and almost neverending... please update soon.

I'm totally in love with this story <3
Oh David <3<3

I just read the first chapter and I had to say it's really great story. Too bad I had lectures today otherwice I would read the rest right away. I love Jamie! He's such a hilarious and so far nice person. Hope to see more of him.
I'm also curious to see how things progress between this triangle -Callum, David and Mr. Sharp. That's really interesting trinity there.
Good luck with your writing! You're doing great!

Ahhh Dead, you're too funny! And that's ALL I was thinking about was how the HELL is David going to pull this one off -not letting Sharp see his white cum stains on his tres expensive suit pants. lol I mean, Sharp would notice if David all of a sudden CHANGED SUITS!!!! lol But oh well, no matter. It's all working out for Sharp and David anyway, if those memos are authentic. :( Poor Callum.

At first when I saw the memo, I thought they were talking about Clive Warren, but then I noticed Sharp's memo said the didn't know much about CW, so then of course it couldn't have been Warren they were talking about.

I guess Warren and Jamie were right when they told Callum to stay away from David.

Can't wait for chapter four! :)

Oh, and that idea about the energy and such that Sharp has planned is very ingenious. What an awesome idea! But what do I know; this idea could have been in the works for real and I wouldn't know about it. lol

Oh, one more thing Dead: when you're writing about how many stories a building is, it's stories; "seventy-two stories", not storeys. I noticed you did that in the first two chapters also.... =) Ok, so totally disregard this comment. I just Googled it, just to make sure and voila! I'm wrong! Well, I'm right and I'm wrong! In the states it's stories, but apparently in Britain, it's storeys. I did not know that. See, you learn something new every day. lol

Jamie's a pisser: "....can't you just fuck him in the office supply cupboard and get over it?" That was hysterical!

I can't believe Callum's been there only three days and he's already so into David.

And I can't believe Sharp didn't notice a stain on David's pants. lol That's what I was waiting for; Sharp to totally go bonkers b/c David's pants had cum stains on them. lol

Awesome chapter Dead! Can't wait for the next one! :)

LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. You're an incredible writer and I can already tell there's so much more to David than what we've seen. Can't wait to read the rest and I hope you never abandon this story.

So good so far =)

Must admit David does seem like a mysterious character ~ don't really know what to expect from him yet.

I'm quite captured by your characters and story~ Can't wait for your next chapter!

Wow! One chapter in and im already hooked. David seems like a very complex character and can't wait to see him develop. Can't wait for more!

this is awesome! i love the characters (although the main guy is a kind of a dick about his pursuit of David). (I am absolutely in love with david myself actually). I can not wait for more of this! i cant wait to see how this story progresses. and by the way, your writing is lovely.

You can rest assured; this story is terrific! Callum is so promiscious, (not sure if that's spelled correctly; I'm too lazy to look it up), flirting outright with David and knowing that Bossman doesn't like it. lol He's a pip that guy. ;)

David can be so sweet at times, but then he can be cold too. I wonder if he gets that from Sharp.

Excellent story DeadLetter. I can't wait for chapter two! :)