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Boy, David is a tough nut to crack (lol, that sounds perverted). One minute, he'll be sweet and flirty and then when Callum says something that upsets him a couple of seconds later, he's cold and irritable. Hm...I wonder why? Anyways, keep the good chapters rolling; It makes my day when a favorite story of mine is updated!

Well now things are going to get complicated for Callum because I'm not sure how he is going to act in front of Sharp next time... And I hope David is being sincere with Callum and he's worth the risk of a secret relationship that could cost his employment or more.
David character is lovely and vulnerable but mysterious and hard to decipher at the same time.

I love this story but I find myself hating Sharp even though he's only been mentioned in passing at the moment. I feel sorry for Callum and sorta for David; Callum's putting his feelings on his sleeve and David's (willingly) bound in servitude and at this moment I'm not sure if David's name is correct because I have bad memory. Don't be offended, though, I so want to read more though.

I knew it! I knew Sharp would go ballistic when he noticed that David wasn't wearing his own clothes. And of course the beating wasn't part of any kinky sex shit. Sharp beat David in anger and David is too indebted to him to walk away. If he even can walk away.

As always Dead, looking foward to more! :)

Wow! I am really, really enjoying this story so far. The characters are interesting, and I'm very interested in what will happen to them. Your writing is nicely detailed, so I can picture every scene perfectly. Great!

Can't wait for more! ^_^

Super super intriguing! Can't wait for more.

OOhh, I think David is really developing feelings for Callum. He seemed pretty upset he had to leave the game. I think that Sharp knew David was with Callum. Somehow he knew. I wouldn't put it past him to have had Callum's apartment bugged when he got the job. You know, just to make sure he was on the up and up. Even with David's spying, Sharp would sorta want to see for himself, right? Oh, yeah, video cameras. Shit, I wonder if they're up. Oh my f'ng God, if he, well, not HE, but someone he hired, installed video cameras in Callum's apartment, David and Callum are both screwed, and not in the good way. lol

Also...David better run home and change b/c Sharp is gonna know those aren't his clothes. THEN what's David gonna say????? Hmmmm?

Oh boy, the plot thickens! lol Terrific chapter Dead! :)

I really like how this story is going. Please continue to update; I think I'll lose it if another story that I like is discontinued right in the middle of it! But I know people have their reasons but you don't get to have any! No! LOL just kidding! Anyways keep up the good work!

Love love love this chapter! Great work, as always. Can't wait for the next one! I'm just wondering if Sharp will notice David wearing Callum's clothes... Or if David's going back home to change.

Haha, Dead, you are so funny! I was reading this chapter when I supposed to be watching my kid wrestle. Bad, bad mom. Anyway, I was cracking up reading your a/n about the initials and about the cum stain. Had to turn around to make sure no one was reading it over my shoulder. lol That's why I'm glad I read this on my phone. I would NEVER buy a tablet and read it on there; then EVERYONE would be able to read all my gay porn! lol God forbid! These wrestling moms don't know my gay porn side. :) lol

Anyway....I am sure Callum will give David another shot. I can tell he's still infatuated with him. I can't wait to hear his explanation.