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Dang it, Dead! I'm like sitting at the edge of my seat on pins and needles now!!!! What does Sharp want? If it was to talk about the report, David could have just said that. I don't have a good feeling about this.

And Jane calling in sick. Hmmmm, I don't buy that for a minute. I bet she and Sharp are planning something. The forty-four missed calls to David may have been part of the plan they're concocting. Oh, and as for planting the video surveillance cameras in the offices, Sharp could already have had them in place but not told David about them. Seeing that he has trust/jealousy issues anyway as far as David's concerned. Of course if this were the case. Sharp wouldn't need Jane's input; he'd be able to see for himself on the tapes.

Ok, well, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter Dead! :) And no more wrestling, so I can concentrate fully on your hella awesome story! =)

My favourite story at the moment <3 And it's getting better and better!
I can't help but love David and at the same time having the feeling that he's playing with Callum...

Is it weird that I check this story almost every day, hoping for an update? You've got me hooked! I can't wait to see what's next for David and Callum!

So I never review from my phone b/c it's a pain in the ass, but I didn't want to forget by the time I get home. I'm supposes to be watching my kid wrestle in the hige New England H.S. Wrestling Tourney but I'm reading my gay porn. Lol.

Callum sure has his work cut out for him. How can he poasibly replace Sharp? The only thing he can give David as he said is unconditional love. But will that be enough? After all, they are pretty much fired at this point. What w/Jane possibly blabbing to Sharp and-or the other C.W. and David not responding to 44 missed calls of Sharp's is a sure way to get canned. But then Sharp would probably fire Callum & keep David b/c he loves the control he has over him. And he loves the power & having David indebted to him.

Oh and why would Callum and David think that there aren't any cameras in the offices? That's the first thing I would think that control-freak Sharp would do is bug the offices w/audio & video equipment.

Looking forward to the next update! :)

Lol, I review like immediately after I read. I know you're supposed to but sometimes, I feel like a kid on crack and sugar. That's a good thing for you, though, lol. So, David and Callum make up --I'm all for that. Yay! Oh noes, but what about Jane (even though I kinda don't like her; I do feel bad for her)? Will she blab to Sharp or Clive Warren? The answer is in the next chapter (maybe)!...Anyways, darn it Callum, I've told you about keeping it in your pants during office hours! Now look at what you did! Lol, I love this story. It's like you give us enough to enjoy and then you leave wanting more; I love it! The suspense, David's constant mood swings and Callum's puppy dog ways are all likable.

I agree, Scottish accents are sexy! I love listening to Craig Ferguson, yep, so sexy. lol

Boy, David can go hot and cold from one minute to the next. I am glad that they're "bonding". haha


David seemed so sad though at the end. He knows that he will always be indebted to Sharp and can never leave him. But why would Sharp want somebody who is only there b/c they're blackmailing them? Wouldn't Sharp want someone who actually wants to be with him?

Ok on to the next chapter!

Dammit, what were they fighting about? And David raises his voice to Sharp???? lol

Now I don't know if I truly believe Jane when she told Callum that David wanted them to hook-up. From the look on David's face, I would say she made the whole thing up.

And David; so many people telling Callum that he's manipulative, he'll be anything you want him to be, devious......what is going on with him?

You always leave me wanting more Dead! :)

I just don't know what to think about David - Is he good? Is he bad? Well, I love him anyway.. In chapter 7 during his bath with Callum we learn that they have some sort of relationship in the future and his behavior could have been fake (he likes to role play). Then in chapter 8 we find out he raised his voice to Sharp -- how does a sub raise his voice to his Master?. Is Sharp really his Master or is there something else going on? It seemed during the meeting when Callum first meet Jane that David might have been trying to set them up but now after sleeping with Callum, maybe David has second thoughts.?. I can't wait to read more!!!

I love it! I can't wait to see what this "upset" is...

Yay! Another chapter! Oh and I love reviewing your story. Now, onto other things. David's relationship with Sharp reminds me of another story with a similar situation between them. I forget the name but I find that you execute it quite well. Um, David's really fickle, isn't he lol? He secretly sets Jane and Callum up and then when he sees them "flirting" together, he gets mad! Lol, and then Callum feels guilty, even though he did nothing wrong (that's my opinion), and ends up begging like a hungry puppy! Have some dignity, man! But I still love him and David and I still have a strong distaste for Sharp! Keep it going, though! XD