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Hm....I suppose you did good, Dead.

No, seriously though, I commend you for even trying to go through with this...challenge? I'm sure Callum will break down also after seeing that portrait but it's okay --I just wanted David to suffer a little, though...that might not be the case since he practically blocked out everything Callum was yelling at him about. Deep down, he probably does find Callum special but for some reason...it's like he almost can't comprehend the fact that eventually everyone IS going to leave him with the way he pushes people away with his relationship with Sharp...kinda like what Callum was saying. I still don't like Sharp lol but that should be understood and David is slowly losing his place in my favorite characters list and Callum is still at the top.

But I do feel bad for David --he's completely convinced himself that he needs Sharp and that anyone who doesn't want to deal with their BS is abandoning him, somewhat throwing the other person's feelings out the window but still...he drew a beautiful portrait of Callum.

What the f*** is he playing at?

Only time will tell. Ooohhh, I can't wait! More chapters PLEAZE!

So you accept my challenge, hm?

Okay, Dead, we'll see how all this turns out but you may be well on the way to winning --Callum's not feeling guilty right off the bat for a change! Jamie's finally leaving and he knows the truth, that's good. Poor thing. I would be pretty pissed if I found out something like that --all my hard work and effort was nothing; I was just a pawn in a game between my best friend and his lover. David...is slowly pushing me away from his team and I still I have a strong distaste for Sharp lol. I wonder what Callum's gonna do --we all know that David is like his drug and he can't have enough. I can't wait to see what you do! XD

I'm very intrigued about what are David intentions now. I can't help but loving him though :D

You know, for the longest time I thought Jamie was gay. lol I think it was mentioned in a chapter or two before this one that he was talking about some girl, but I sort of dismissed it. So I was a little shocked when he spoke about Lucia. lol

You know, it's so sad to see someone like David, fifteen-year old David, turn into an addict and more. What happened? Why did he change so much?

I agree w/Callum; (or was it Jamie, now I forgot, well, whoever), when he said that David is a grown man now and he needs to make his own decisions and not be blackmailed AND BEATEN by this rich, pompous ass. Even if David has to move, jeez, is Sharp going to follow him around the world?

Can't wait to find out what David wants to give Callum. :)

ok... Why is Clive being somewhat nice to David? He did tell Callum that David liked rough sex so we should @ssume (I know never @ssume anything) that he knows about David and Sharps relationship. Just when you thought David has no friends and the only people he knows are those who can do something for him - we get to hear Jamie talk about how David was before he "needed" Sharp. I would love to find out what happened in art school to make him the person he is today - something had to happen or someone had to say something in order for him to go off the rails like he did. I wonder what he wants to give Callum? A piece of his artwork perhaps? I said before that I think David does feel something for Callum and I still believe it. I love the story and look forward to your updates!

OMG! I didn't expect that from Sharp. Great turns of events.
Please Callum: you can't give up on David, you have to help him! :D

...Wow...That's all I can say at the moment. Of course, for some weird reason I'm laughing. But that's because you were right about me not liking David this chapter. It seems that Callum's feelings are hurt (again). David's probably going to be apologetic but somehow Callum's going to end up apologizing (again)...Unless you're going to prove me wrong, Dead? (There's no malice in that, only humor) I actually like where this story is going. I think I like it when the main character of any story has their feelings hurt or when they're faced with some huge obstacle. Callum's obstacle is David's dependence on Sharp. He's going to need all the help he can get to overcome that. Actually, I think the only person who CAN help Callum is David but that just kinda makes everything loop around again...Oh well. Yays, give more chapters! XD

Well... I have mixed feelings on Sharps relationship with David. Sharp really seems to think that David needs him and he said he would make sure it stayed that way. You could take that to mean he's an @ss who wants to control David or you could take it as Sharp really wanting to be there for David to make sure he's always ok. As for the video - I just can't decide if Davids face was real or not (I'm with Callum on that). The last two sentences in this chapter were my favorite because it shows Callum standing up for himself but I'm sure the ever so smooth David will make him see his side and all will be forgiven. He'll say that he took the blame so Callum could keep his job and that's why he helped him to get ready for his meeting. I really believe that David is a master manipulator but I also believe that he has some sort of feelings for Callum. We'll just have to wait and see what they are.

Great job in working in that surveillance camera Dead! :)

How can Callum take whatever Sharp says as the truth? For all he knows, SHARP instructed David to act out that little scene about seducing Callum and how Callum doesn't mean anything to him. For all Callum knows, Sharp saw on tape what they've been up to, or Jane went right to him with what she saw and Sharp is blackmailing David and filming them together just to get back at Callum.

You know, with these two you never know who's telling the truth; David or Sharp. And when Sharp said David gets off on pain, there really wasn't much pain at all in the video. I was expecting to see David decked out in leather and stuff and chained to a bed while someone whips him into shape and uses him. lol Glad THAT wasn't the case!

Now even though Jamie and Warren and Sharp himself talk about David like David is some chameleon who changes personalities into whoever people want him to be, I'm still not sure I trust Sharp at all.

So Dead...I am so conflicted. lol But I still don't like Sharp. Oh, I just thought of something: David is going to be working closely with Callum AND Clive on the project! Someone he once slept with and someone he's sorta currently sleeping with. :)

Can't wait to read more!

I didn't review as fast this time --Sorry. Anyways, uh-oh, Mr. Sharp wants to see Callum in his office *gasps*! I wonder what he wants --probably to rub in Callum's face that he still "owns" David. That'd be pretty messed up but it's not like Callum is trying to be covert about his affections. And you're right, I shouldn't trust David but I can't seem to help myself. See, he's good at manipulation. I think I feel the worse for Callum (and Jamie). Well, Jamie especially. He's completely oblivious to the fact that he's being used to blackmail David. Oh well...

I still love this story. It keeps me on edge.