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February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
argggghhh so good, and so much good angst...awesome update chapter, hanging on till the next one, you rock!!
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February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I haven't had time to sit and read this story for so long! Just sat and read through 5+ chapters for the latest updates. And once again let me applaud you for your ability to not only create lots of engaging characters but to also manage to make them all relevant to your plot without confusing your readers.
So happy Luca is going to be saved! Gosh I almost screamed when Mystic had that vision of Dominic killing Luca. It was worse when Luca and Dominic argued over getting rid of the baby. I kind of understood Luca point but then I don't think he really got how much his death would affect Dominic, especially given their bond. Thankfully, the goddess helped make everything right again! She's the one who created them right, the one who saved the Sepherus' lover? I guess she's trying to save him as Luca's baby again. What I'm still trying to understand is what the wolf is supposed to represent. Is it the wolf part Luca received when he became Alpha? And I wish Dominic would shift andfight to protect Luca again at some point. HAve to say I already miss Dominic shifting XD.
About Mystic, thankfully he was able to bring the Fae water to help Luca. Now I can't wait for what's to come for him too. Is the King his fate or is it someone else? I've been wondering who would be Mystic mate for a long time. At one point I even imagined it might be Dirk or one of the shifters the council is sending XD. But ah I can't wait. I'm also excited about Dirk coming to Luca's mansion. As soon as I saw the bit about his luggage, I was sure he would come find Dominic, the only one he ever felt better with. I would also love to see him interact with Luca and other vampires.
I also wonder why Death want Jeremiah so much!! Kind of intrigued with his character. And Nazarphy waiting in the dark to kill Luca's baby... So much to happen.
Okay stopping here before this gets excessively long. I can't wait for the next update.
So happy Luca is going to be saved! Gosh I almost screamed when Mystic had that vision of Dominic killing Luca. It was worse when Luca and Dominic argued over getting rid of the baby. I kind of understood Luca point but then I don't think he really got how much his death would affect Dominic, especially given their bond. Thankfully, the goddess helped make everything right again! She's the one who created them right, the one who saved the Sepherus' lover? I guess she's trying to save him as Luca's baby again. What I'm still trying to understand is what the wolf is supposed to represent. Is it the wolf part Luca received when he became Alpha? And I wish Dominic would shift andfight to protect Luca again at some point. HAve to say I already miss Dominic shifting XD.
About Mystic, thankfully he was able to bring the Fae water to help Luca. Now I can't wait for what's to come for him too. Is the King his fate or is it someone else? I've been wondering who would be Mystic mate for a long time. At one point I even imagined it might be Dirk or one of the shifters the council is sending XD. But ah I can't wait. I'm also excited about Dirk coming to Luca's mansion. As soon as I saw the bit about his luggage, I was sure he would come find Dominic, the only one he ever felt better with. I would also love to see him interact with Luca and other vampires.
I also wonder why Death want Jeremiah so much!! Kind of intrigued with his character. And Nazarphy waiting in the dark to kill Luca's baby... So much to happen.
Okay stopping here before this gets excessively long. I can't wait for the next update.
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February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Geeze, poor Luca can never get a break!
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February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and very entertaining. I hope Luca will be safe!
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February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god you so can't kill of Luca!!!! Please don't!!!! Please let them find a way to prevent it!!! I can't stand it if Luca dies!!!! Oh my god!!!! Please update soon!!!
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February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHH!!!! Noooooo!!!! Don't kill off Luca! He's the most amazing character ever! Where the heck is Franklin and Bride when you need them? Now I'm all teary.
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February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ack! evil cliffie! *waits for more*
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February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh what an evil cliffhanger! Luca can't die. Mystic's vision can't be true, nope, he's gonna be ok.
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February 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
NOoooooo please no, the vision must not come true, Luca's death will devastate Dominic and family, and me! Need the next chapter like yesterday!!! This story is breath-taking, literally!!
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January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Franklin gave Luca a kitty?! I choked on my soda when I read that! That explained a lot of things! xD
Pretty cool beans having my question answered. Still concerned about Dominic's family though. The guy ran off to be with his true mate! Instead of fighting against it, they should accept it and let him be happy! At least Dirk is accepting of it. And it was both really sweet and really creepy the way Bride let Luca and Dominic see the baby. It was creepy to imagine Luca's insides but super duper sweet imagining how Elijah looked in his belly.
Pretty cool beans having my question answered. Still concerned about Dominic's family though. The guy ran off to be with his true mate! Instead of fighting against it, they should accept it and let him be happy! At least Dirk is accepting of it. And it was both really sweet and really creepy the way Bride let Luca and Dominic see the baby. It was creepy to imagine Luca's insides but super duper sweet imagining how Elijah looked in his belly.