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I want me some more Ellis and Raven please! I love the trouble they get into, LOL. Awesome chapter again.

Love the stories, love the characters, hate that they keep ending! I really really want more of all of them. Really a lot.

Poor Luca his mate is so harsh to him I really pity him!!! And I just adore alix^^ can'wait to see more from him!! And I just new that one of the twins would be valentines mate ^^ just didn't know which of the two^^ luca reaction to mikes pregnancy was just amazing^^^ see you again soon!!!

YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! You're back! I was so excited when I saw the update for Luca and Lou and Mika's Pups. I can't wait to see what everyone says around the twins not knowing they can understand them especially if they start talking about Luca. I loved the insight into Valentine's past and can't wait to read more about him and Love. The phone call from Mika was hilarious and now I can't wait to read the chapter you put up for Mika's pups, Dominic is being a jerk who needs to get his head out of his arse and I can't wait to see what mayhem Raven and Ellis cause. And did I miss where they stole Jeremiah's gun or is that something they will be doing in the future. I have a feeling that the person who bumped into Mystic was Dominic in which case the vision was about Luca, am I right? I would love to hear more about Chris/Reggie. You have so many stories going for this series now and each new chapter seems to introduce another storyline, I really don't know how you do it let alone you contemplating another completely unrelated story but if you do start another one I liked the sound of Werewolves, Magic and Vampires Oh My. Well I'm off to read Mika's Pups.

First, let me just say how HAPPY I am that you're back. I checked every other day. May blessings fall all over your sister!!!!!
Now, great chapters. You really gave more depth to the characters and a little back story and Poor Lovel. Mika's having a serious case of hormone imbalance. Brought back memories. Dominic needs to get with the program before what's his name shows up!!! And Love is Valentines mate???? Love's going to heal him, isn't he? Now that could be a story on it's own. Drama drama drama. Bring it on!

I'd love a story for Reggie and Chris...I want to know how they met, their history, drama and a happy ever after.
I like the story idea for the bumbling wizard. The second one, not so much.

Happily waiting for more.

Good Chapter but although I am feeling so sorry for Luca. I think I'm going to love the twins!! Also, I say go for it, I'd definitely read them.

Hi there, Arie.
I Love Luka's story. And finally the twins arrived.
Just some minor mistakes that i'd like to point out for the Japanese side.
Watashinonamaeha Serabiel-desu. Soshite, kore wa watashi no otōtodesu, Love. Wareware desu za De’leon futago"

It will be better if it's " Hajimemashite, watashi wa Sarabiel-desu (or Sarabieru if u wanna make it sound more Japanese.)
Soshite, kochirawa watashino otouto, Love desu. Watashitachi wa D'Leon Futago desu."
"hajimemashite" is usually said when they meet another person for the first time. It's basic courtery, so I think it's better to include it.
Hiragana "ha" is sometimes read as "wa" to indicate subject of a topic.

Or you can add another sentence.
"Jitsu wa, Otousan o sagashitan desuga, kare wa imasuka." (actually, we're looking for our father. Is he around?)

Hope this is able to help you. If you need simple Japanese words, i maybe able to help. Although I'm not exactly proficient in the language, but able to form simple conversation sentences.

Looking forward to your next Chapter! Cheers!!

don't you dare i want to read them. please. love the chapter

Love this series! Makes me laugh, thank you. Your stories are fun to read, right what your imagination let's you. I would read.

Gotta love that Luca! He really knows how to cause an uproar! xD