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Is it plausible for the Doctor to put a tracking chip, something like a GPS, in her just in case she tries to escape again so they can track her down by the chip implanted in her skin (or elsewhere like her ass, breast, etc.)?

You updated! Hurray! I do expect our slave-in-training will think again next time she plots an escape. I'm sure the upcoming punishment will make sure of that. I somehow sense some brutal anal treatment coming up... and some dogs having their way with her. (The human ones :D)
Oh, and the pretty blond servant girl obviously needs punishment too for letting the bitch escape! I hope Sophia will be witness of that too. (or part of it) Maybe with the inclusion of: “You feel sorry for her? This isn't half as bad as what we have in store for you!"

I wanna know how large her breasts are and hope they are huge because then the doc and his friends can come up with fun ways to use them.

After such a long wait, I don't know about anyone else but I personally was looking forward to a long and smutty chapter which this one did not deliver like you stated it would in chapter 4. I hope next update will feature lots of heavy punishment/angst/smut/toys/chains/cum/ you name it and supply it. I hope she is thoroughly punished by the Mistress and then again by the Doctor when he returns. She should never be allowed to have free movement and should always be constrained in one way or another or she might try to escape again. I hope the blond man sticks branches up her ass, maybe rocks too. I think she needs a thorough enema cleaning and use of a hose too just be to humiliated and it should be done in front of the other slaves.

LOVE IT!! Please update soon!!

Ooooh, you're back!!!! I just got home from work and just sat down at my desk to eat my supper and check on updates to stories I follow or new ones I might find. I am so happy to have found you have updated after such a long absence. I hope whoever in your family is sick feels better soon too so very sorry to hear about that. I hope this means you are back on track and we can expect to read more chapters sooner rather than later. My only flaw with chapter 5 is it was way too short and the spacing made it kind of hard to read but other than that I enjoyed Sophia's flight or rather fight for freedom and am looking forward to her punishment and also the good Doctor's return. Especially, once he finds out how naughty she has been, lol.

Oh this is brilliant! Awesome smut, and the first thense and first person point of view make it that more captivating. The first chapter was fantastic, hot from beginning until end. The other chapters had a few offs for me and to be honest, I wouldn't mind of the evil docter came to collect her from the farm and have some more warped group sessions with her. There are my personal offs in this story: pregnancy and 'breeding' references, and the dogs (sorry, out of all possible beasts my least favorite) My personal ons: the humiliation, the use of tools and fisting with other guys watching/participating. I really like multiple and huge penetrations and gapes etc.
I really hope you will get around posting the fifth chapter, and many more juicy, smutty chapters after that too. It doesn't mattert that you can't update every week, but please, don't abandon this story. Even once a year would be fine. Though I seriously hope it'll be more often than that! If you want I will feed you with everything you need; requests, suggestions, even ideas for other stories, anything that will keep you writing!

You know what would make the story even hotter? Make her beg for it when the doctor really takes her (and then have her feel really humiliated about it). The bullet vibrators were sweet too: please use them again and maybe have more than one up in her vagina. Fingering when around his friends and have her moan infront of them. And write the actual moanings. I know it's cheap porn, but it would be hot ;)
That's just what I think would be fun. You do as you want to of course :)

would be great for you to update or give a reason why you didn't like you promised it is actually kind of sad since a lot of readers liked it and took time to let you know by leaving reviews unlike some other stories that are just as good if not better but don't get the number of reviews you did hope you don't lose your following since you forgot about them

I guess you must be extremely busy and that's why you haven't been able to update. Best wishes for a prosperous and healthy New Year.