rate_review Reviews

Hi, I just found your story by accident but really like it and hope to be able to read more of it in the future. It's very entertaining and naughty, LOL.

You haven't updated since February! Please update soon and make it a nice long chapter. Thank you.

Is this story discontinued or on hiatus?

I hope you continue this story, I want to see more of Aries and Apollo fighting over her hehehehehe.

Somehow in light of everything that has happend so far I had expected somthing worse than this for punishment, but i enjoyed it. I do somehow sense that you're struggling a bit with how far you want or do not want to go with the severity of torture, i mean, last chapter you were suggesting putting brambles in her ass, something nobody could ever enjoy in the slightest, and would probably make sure any further penetration would be excruciating. I'll say i'm not displeased to see you backed away from that idea . I assume your point of it all right now is that she realises that she loves to be used and abused in this way, and will possibly come to a point where she actually desires, and even starts beging for it. It's a good angle, and i still want to read more.

Yay! The doc is coming back soon :D I hope she actually will turn into the perfect slut who begs her master to fuck her xD I do hope they'll use protection because I'm not a big fan of pregnancy kink.

I was very disappointed by this latest chapter and thought Sophia's punishment would be just that and she would not have enjoyed it like she did. I didn't realize the Doctor, her new Master, has other untrained 'patients'
but that's what Mistress Sirena told her. I thought she was his first and only sex slave/pet but guess that's another misunderstanding on my part. I didn't like having to wait for you to finally update when you promised to do so sooner, the chapters are still much too short another broken promise by you because you mentioned they would be longer so yet again you didn't deliver. This story is not as entertaining as the first two chapters and you have lost me as a reader but I do wish you good luck going forward.

Oh, oh, maybe the girl slave who Sophia knocked out will be allowed to help punish Sophia and that she is not as weak or mild as Sophia thought.

Oh, or have the mistress lady put Sophia in a fight pen of some sort where she has to fight the slave girl but the only thing is Sophia will be tossled up and helpless so therefore will lose the fight anyway but the slave girl can use whatever she wants on Sophia to punish her.

I bet the doctor has more tools than just those bullet vibes... I would like fo him to put a butt plug in her anus and then fuck her pussy. I still hope she soon will beg to be fucked ;)