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Oh my Gawd!!!!!! You updated!!!!! I luv ya!!!!! Now, I am going to read chapter 3 and then leave another review!!!!!! You are the best!!!!!

I loved it! Wished it was longer and bit more detailed but really enjoyed it regardless. What about the knot on a male dog? Was she raped by multiple dogs or just the man? If one of the dogs did rape her, it would have been interesting to see the knot being forced into her and then her having to wait until the swelling goes down for him to get it out. Did they rape her anus too? Oh please consider all the other ideas I gave you, there was plenty of them, LOL. Please update again soon! You are the bestest. Oh, I am gong to try and think of other ideas for you too but did give you a lot to think over.

I loved it! Wished it was longer and bit more detailed but really enjoyed it regardless. What about the knot on a male dog? Was she raped by multiple dogs or just the man? If one of the dogs did rape her, it would have been interesting to see the knot being forced into her and then her having to wait until the swelling goes down for him to get it out. Did they rape her anus too? Oh please consider all the other ideas I gave you, there was plenty of them, LOL. Please update again soon! You are the bestest. Oh, I am gong to try and think of other ideas for you too but did give you a lot to think over.

Oh, I just thought of another way to torture the poor girl (I am so naughty)! How about sticking her with large and small needles everywhere?

I just found your story and let me tell you I am hooked. I part with her going to get a pap exam and that happening to her, oh man, I am always petrified of speculum and hate being spread helpless like that myself with the stirrups. Will we find out more about this doctor? Is she his first slave? Is he married? Where will he keep her? I hope he takes her back to the office again and his associates visit them. Who is the guy in the dog mask? I am glad I found this.

Oh, it's me again, can you please fix the spacing/paragraphs for chapter 3. Everything is all mushed together and it's a little harder to read. THank you! I will check back again.

Oh, what happened what did the doctor mean by telling this; "We're having an exclusive open clinic tomorrow and you are going to be the main attraction." Did you miss that part? Because chapter two was him taking her away in the car.

Loved this. Please keep going with it.

Oh, please continue this story. I want to know who this mysterious woman is and what is going to happen to the girl in this Training and Breeding house. Please have them use an enema on her to clean her out. What about something like water boarding punishment. I love the shock collar you are using along with all the other contraptions the doctor has used one her. Here are some ideas, tattoos and various body piercings? I would love to see her raped by large dogs, snakes, pigs, all kind of animals along with men and women raping her. This is really good and I hope you write more chapters but please finish it. It would be nice to see some artwork put up somewhere too of these characters. Has this doctor done this before to any of his other patients? Does she have friends/co-workers/family/boyfriend who will miss and look for her? This story is well written and quite dirty. It's a nice fantasy dream to read about it so you have to continue with it.

How about double penetration in her anus and putting various objects in it. Baseball bat, bottles, stuff like that. What about waxing her body of all body hair, and torturing her with candle wax. Sticking ice cubes up her butt. Electric shocking her butt maybe with a cattle prod.