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Oh, I forgot this one.

She must be hungry and thirsty since it's been over a day since she's had any food, I assume. So, get her hooked on drinking cum for part of her meals.

Sorry, I forget this idea too. Give her a brand showing ownership by the good doctor.

Alright, that's it, I won't bother you with my silly ideas anymore today and thanks for putting up with me.

Hello. I am rather embarrassed to admit this but I rather like your story and hope you continue with it. I somehow missed reading it the first time around that you posted but will keep an eye out for new chapters from now on. Thanks for updating otherwise I would never have found it.

Good morning my new favorite author! This is my daily nudge to you to update when you are able. So, I was thinking about what the Doctor said to her and hope he does take her back to the clinic (it's the weekend right?) and his associates can drop by again then they can play with her in the office some more. I have a feeling she is starting to enjoy the stuff they are doing to her but that is why this is fiction not reality so you things can be different even if other people might not like them. Oh, thanks for fixing chapter 3 but you might want to look it over again (like you are seeing it from out POV) not your author panel because some of the sentences are in tiny text but the rest is good.

I can't believe you updated. I was so afraid this would be left in limbo like so many other stories that are started here then left abandoned. I was just reading through the reviews and like all the suggestions offered so far. I would like to see her made to always crawl around on the floor and only allowed to stand when he needs to punish her, dress or take her somewhere. I guess he could stash her in some contraption when transporting her in the car instead of having her sit on the seat just in case the police ever stop him for some reason. My only complaint is the very short chapters. Chapter 1 was nice and long as well as very detailed so I hope you get back to writing them like that. Have a nice weekend and thanks for not abandoning this.

Oh, it's me again. Would you please give a description of what Miss Winters looks like; eye color, hair, height, weight, measurements, etc.

Guess who? I am always lurking around AFF so you can't get rid of me that easy, LOL.

Anyhoo, I think the good Doctor should keep Miss Winters filled to the brim at all times with cum but only during the times that he can't fill her holes with other interesting items. Does he have like a medical office in his home, does he have a dungeon? I think you could make this story novel length because there are so many ways he can have fun with his new slave.

In regards to this part of chapter 3; "I need to leave for a few days. I have some things I need to clear up before I can continue my new toys' training. Would you be opposed to boarding her for a few days until I return?" Does that mean he is going back to his office and her apartment to clear all evidence that she ever existed? Is the girl that was on the front desk in his office in on her abduction? Do those other doctors have slaves? There are so many unanswered questions and I need the answers too.

Holy crap, this story is freaking HOT and am getting really wet reading it myself. I am a dirty little whore who wants to eat up more of this amazingly erotic story.

Hey, I promised to review daily and will from now on until you update and even after!

So, how about they wrap her up like an Egyptian mummy? Another idea, how about fill her holes with various fruits? Cover her body with honey or food of any sort including her holes and then someone either human or animals can lick or eat it off of her? Put her on a rack of some sort or a dunking stool like they used to use when people were suspected of being witches?

I will try and think of some more ideas for you to use.