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I really should get to bed, hey, I am in P.J.'s so almost there where I can dream about the perils of Miss Winters, LOL. Here's another idea; thumb screws or something on that idea not to break any bones or anything just for pain and pleasure like on her nipples and other sensistive spots. Oh, will the guy in the dog mask fall for her much, much, much later and they escape and run off together or will she stay with the good Doctor...

So, I have decided this will be my last review until your next update because I feel like I am bothering you too much and don't want to do that. These are some more ideas I've come up with; 1.) The Doctor can us her as a test experiment to test different instruments and other stuff on and see how she reacts to them. 2.) He can use her as something like a guinea pig and see how much she squeals. 3.) Bring her to his clinic and let interns and students practice on her. 4.) Use her as a teaching tool for his students like during a seminar or something. 4.) Invite all his associates over to his home and she is the main course (not cannibalism of course except to lick and bite and taste her, LOL.) 5.) She gets feisty and starts fighting back then keeps trying to escape even to the point of attacking and trying to knock him out somehow but keeps getting caught, then he gets mad and thinks of evil ways to punish her for it. Alright, that's it until your next update which I hope won't be too long of a wait since you have lots of ideas thrown at you in reviews. See you hopefully again! P.S. I know you might get some negative reviews from readers who have nothing else better to do than pick on authors but ignore them. I know some people don't like stories of people getting raped by animals but too bad because this isn't real life it's just fantasy and made up so no one is being hurt.

Oh my gosh! Poor Sophia! I am glad we finally learned her first name. I can't imagine that her new Master will want to breed her with Aries unless he wants children but they wouldn't be his. How long has Aries been Sirena's prize alpha stud and is it a mutual agreement they both have together or was he too forced into this life style? I don't think anyone will be worried about her or know she is missing so think she will end up staying with her new Master for as long as he wants her. Has he ever had another slave or is she his first? If he has, what happened to his previous one? Did he sell her or let her go? I still have a lot of questions on my mind that needs answers and hope we learn more as story progresses. Good chapter and hope to be able to read more real soon. I am delectably hooked.

I was a little disappointed by another short chapter but liked learning more about Miss Winters. Does Mistress Sirena have cameras in the kennel where Sophia and Aries are sleeping? Did she hear Sophia calling her a Bitch and will she be punished for it? Where did the Doctor go and what is he doing? How close are the Doctor and Mistress Sirena? So, any chance you will double update today?

Oh, why didn't they keep the shock collar on her so she couldn't talk? Why doesn't she have mitts on her hands to she can't use them? I would think they would have kept her filled even at night while she's resting so her holes don't close since the Doctor worked so hard to keep them open.

Well, unfortunately, I didn't get wet reading this latest chapter but hope I do in the next one, LOL. One thing that was very interesting is that Miss Winters seems to have some spirit still left in her and seems a little feisty. So, since she was thinking of trying to find a way to get out of that place it should be fun seeing what happens when she learns there is no escape and they teach her a lesson in humility that she soon won't forget. Oh, she said she would bite Aries fucking cock off if it ever came near her again. I bet Mistress Serena will not appreciate her trying to bite her prize alpha stud of his prize possession but it would be interesting if she tried and nipped him to see what happens.

Oh, oh, oh, what if Sophia Winters makes an attempt to attack Mistress Serena so she can escape. What would happen? Are they evenly matched so if they did have a fight Sophia would have a chance? Cat Fight!!!!! Get the claws out...... scratch.... hiss.... meow......

Oh, and I still want to know her eye/hair color plus what her breast size is. I can picture her being huge like a C or D cup. He could pierce her clit, butt hole and nipples with heavy rings of some sort that have vibrators on them so she is in constant arousal.

Oh, question, wasn't she wearing a bra or leg stockings in chapter 1? She took off her skirt and blouse then tucked her black lace panties in between them but there was no mention of a bra or nylons so was just wondering.

Oh, I'll definitely take the new chapters even if there are a few flaws because seriously they are not a big deal for me. I love stories like this especially ones with bondage and will admit that I would love to be dominated as she is but am too much of a chicken. You are doing a great job and thanks so much for the quick update it made my day after having to put up with irate customers at work and then the bus ride home was hell as usual too. Night, night. Sweet dreams and happy writing.

Good morning, and what a dreary and rainy Sunday it is so hopefully you will grace me with a new chapter to brighten my day..... nudge....nudge....

So, I have some more ideas along with all those others (don't forget to read back over all your reviews from day 1).

Miss Winters (what's her first name?) is accosted by Mistress Sirena's other jealous slaves and they have their devious way with her putting her through all these evil kind of torments. They think she is high and mighty or too good for them so they keep her entertained all night long and punish her for it.

Mistress Sirena or maybe her new Master could put her on naked on a stake like a scarecrow in the yard (I assume it's a mansion with high walls and dogs/guards patrolling it) then cover her in goodies and let the wild birds have a little fun with her.

Another idea, stake her out on the ground in the yard overnight and let the wild animals have a little fun with her.

She could be milked while being pleasured in different ways by a machine, kittens, puppies, etc. I guess they would have to give her some sort of drug to stimulate her.

Bury her in the ground with just her head stick out so anyone walking by can have fun with her mouth.

I know me evil, LOL, but since this is fiction/fantasy it's not hurting anyone and is just of like living a dirty fantasy out without any real harm.

So, I hope you can update fairly soon and keep on a fast paced schedule. I could see this story be more than 30 chapters long.

I will check back all day just in case you surprise me again.