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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was, yes, difficult to follow, but worth the effort. You have left so much open, but answered a lot as well. It's a wonderful start, and I'm looking forward to reading more. (I've always been a sucker for complicated stories. Complicated characters, too, but stories in particular.)
Anyway, I'm very curious to see where you take this, and I think you're doing well so far. :)
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
Anyway, I'm very curious to see where you take this, and I think you're doing well so far. :)
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu
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February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Strong, strong start. Looking forward to see where you take this.
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February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Forsooth,you disguise what's going on, with constant most archic prose, me thinks your prissy muse needs a good laxative or prehaps he/she needs to stop reading that old Spear person's stuff so much. Damn! It forces me to conscentrate too hard to figure out all the dirty implication. A little archic prose adds atmosphere but too much slows down the flow of the tale. I fear the readers of this web site might find your oblique words tedious, unless of course you get to the dirty parts, really soon. How dare you force me to think while reading I might strain myself LOL!
Sincerely, Ye old Gslinger
PS But truthfully you have piqued my curiousity with this archic tale and I might be forced to read more, just to see what vile perversions will happen. Please don't make me think too hard its most painful.
Sincerely, Ye old Gslinger
PS But truthfully you have piqued my curiousity with this archic tale and I might be forced to read more, just to see what vile perversions will happen. Please don't make me think too hard its most painful.