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for Pain Factory: Prologue

by tamasama

person Dean_Wax
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The beginning felt a little stilted, but the way the events spiral into something like madness at the end of this story is captivating. Was it a hallucination? As I've never taken to disembowelment as eroticism, I value this story more for its mind tricks.