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January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lance should just take the job Chris offered him at his job, he needs to put his pride asides if he wants to keep Harper.
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January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it! :)
I agree with Lance; how could Rae just leave her baby on her brother's doorstep w/o even ringing the damn door just to make sure he was there!
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
I agree with Lance; how could Rae just leave her baby on her brother's doorstep w/o even ringing the damn door just to make sure he was there!
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
a reali nice start! really well done.
I relate with Chris: I'm not a morning person either and... at 6 o'clock I'be prone to murder, too.
the characters are nice and made me smile on a pair of occasions.
I relate with Chris: I'm not a morning person either and... at 6 o'clock I'be prone to murder, too.
the characters are nice and made me smile on a pair of occasions.
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please continue. I'm looking forward to this story. The characters seem nice, and their relationship is interesting. I have no clue how they even met and decided to be roommates but it's only the first chapter.
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Boy! (or is it a Girl?)
Looking forward to the next chapter... Have not formed a true opinion on the story yet, but am willing to see where it will go for now.
Looking forward to the next chapter... Have not formed a true opinion on the story yet, but am willing to see where it will go for now.
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What, don't stop there! Now that's just mean. :p But I like the set-up, and am curious to see what happens next.
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update again today cause I love this :)
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There are far too few stories like this. Update soon please!
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January 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!