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for But A Shadow

by camp30

schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting so interesting!!! I can't wait until we get to see who Himself is!!!! You did an awesome job with these last two chapters. I almost wanted to cry when he was being raped...(Sad...I know). It is just that I can almost see this happening in my mind and I can put myself right there with him. Thanks for the updates! :)
person Mako
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want to know more about briar's past. Why doesn't Cyr fuck him already? Is he saving him for something? Who is He? I hope to read more soon!! I live for the angst. :)
person nine
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow
i am so confused about everything. i feel like i cant trust my assumptions.
i love that you update this so swiftly. thank you so much!
this is wonderful to read!
i love that the pedo will die. but who was he and why is he so easily disposed of? and cyr says briar has value? relief lol
i am so curious about himself.
i wonder if cyr was once a kept boy of himself's?
gosh i love this. when i first started to read this i didnt think i would love it this much. but it is so much more then the usual dark, violent, rapey bdsm m/m
so wonderful
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10
Stunned I was completely stunned when Cyr admitted to Briar the he had made a mistake by letting him get high, what made Cyr slip? He gave permission to take the drugs then took his high away. I know he said he didn’t like the distance in Briar’s eyes which I believe to be true but I think it was also for control. Cyr wants to be the one to inflict pain and pleasure into Briar. For someone who professes over and over again he’s not gay Giraurd does the gayest thing (Oprah’s Retirement-Seriously). I don’t know how to feel about Cyr sending Briar to a job so early, maybe it is like Briar thought to prove he means that little to him? God I wish I knew what was going through Cyr’s head when he found Briar being beaten and also not to read too much into Cyr words what makes Briar so important, because of his beauty, his sexual skills or something entirely different. Oh and yuck the client calling Briar a “child” and I’m with Briar I too would like to watch this pedo come to a bloody end!
person SinfulMind
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is getting truly bizzare, not that I'm complaining. Quite the contary, you seem to pique my interest more and more with every update. Thank you :)
person SinfulMind
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Had a break from AFF.net due to an intensive study session, but I am still a faithful follower :D

The dynamics of Cyr's and Briar's "relationship" is so fucked up... million? Really?! To see people fucking? Gosh... do they not have anything better to spend money on? That could be achieved for free, if one were so inclined :D

I am hoping that Cyr was not talking about selling Briar? Cause that would not make much sense this early on :D He hadn't even tried Briar himself yet :P Though that's gonna soon change from what was agreed on at the end :P Can't wait!
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow that is big bucks. I can't wait for more.
Linda
person miles
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a nightmare ! But I can't wait for more...
Update soon, please :)
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Again much awesomeness!! Of course Briar has some issues! sheesh after what he's been through it'd be a miracle if he didn't want to see people getting punished for hurting him. Loved the chapter! You are an incredible writer! Thanks sooo much for sharing this story! Much love!!!
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11
Obviously Briar did not want the sex that was thursted upon him but I have such a visceral reaction the rapist (I know it just a word but there is so much pain and meaning behind it). Cyr blessing Briar with a stay of execution was touching but there was something else in the back ground, annoyance? Briar wanting to use his morning wood on Celeste made me smile (not because she's a woman I love man on man love), he still has his own sexual desire it proves it hasn't all been taken away from him. Then Celeste blushing so sweet and innocent. You haven't described Briar genitals yet but his balls must be huge! I cringed when I read “Where the fuck have you been?” I've been thinking and I still don't know if Cyr was seeking vengeance towards the Rapist because of the shear violence/rape against Briar or on principal because the man damaged his property? An Arabian prince is never a good thing is it and one with millions to spare and with a predilection for young boys, is there any hope. I don't think it will be difficult to turn 1 million into 4 million I'm positive Cyr will be very pleased with Briar but I don't think he imagined him breaking Briar in with this audience.