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for But A Shadow

by camp30

schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17
What the H E double hockey sticks! I want to be so mad at you for throwing Briar back into the lion’s den but I know you have a bigger purpose for it and I am not so stupid as to question your motives. Himself really is all seeing and all powerful isn’t he. Knowing who Briar refused to fuck and being annoyed at Cyr speaking up and informing Himself of what he already knew. I wonder if Himself knows of Briar’s feeling of Cyr from the few moments he has seen pass between them or is he too like Cyr and found of voyeurism? I once wondered if Briar had lost his love for Cyr but reluctantly consenting to do such atrocities is proof how much love is in Briar and not just for Cyr but for all he cares for.
Oh My God I hate this Prince he’s so obtuse (she says gritting her teeth). Decorating the walk way like some cheap movie set shows how out of touch this Prince is. And apparently his depravity knows no end, having a 10 and 7 year old children as his sex slaves are beyond disgusting. And I hate that you really made me believe that Himself would enforce the deal and have Briar rape a boy who was practically a baby. But now here are my thank you’s: thank you for making Briar hold strong, thank you for Briar’s soul, thank you for Himself putting a stop to his business with the Prince. I am sad that yet again Briar had to suffer another rape and at the cock of this “man”. One last thank you, thank you for lifting the veil and letting us (& Briar see that Himself indeed feels and was horribly affected by what went down in the Palace of Horrors.
All in all this was the hardest chapter to read but I’m glad I did and I’m glad how it ended.
Love you Babes, laters.
You know you love me, XOXO

person Celestialuna
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Himself is very mysterious and I love a good intrigue!
person SinfulMind
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't understand anything anymore. This story is full of contrasts; both Cyr and Himself are right sickos, but then something happens and suddenly they are showing a more human side.
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am still thoroughly puzzled as to where this is going and more questions have been created rather than answered as the story has progressed. Its deliciously frustrating. It was odd seeing Cyr under someone. I don't like Himself and I am glad Briar spoke his mind. One of the questions i have is why is prince Abdual so useful to Himself and then later refused future service? Good chapters. Looking forward to unraveling this.
schedule February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had some catching up to do! :) Himself seems so odd and mysterious! I am so glad that he really didn't approve of what the Prince wanted though... and glad Briar got out of doing that. I felt Briars rage through the words... Great chapters!!!
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow it was a great chapter! That scene in the channel was gross and made me feel for that poor boy so bad! Briar meeting himself at last! Cyr kneeling to him, it's all so strange and so awesome I can't even come up with the words. Chilling is one! Damn I didn't know how bad I needed my Briar fix until I saw the update! Thanks SOOOOOOOOO much for it and I will be anxiously awaiting more! MUCH love!!!
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15
Last chapter was such a rollercoaster (in a way I love) of emotion, and then here you make me laugh with in a few lines: “Gosh mister, really for real?” , and what a good sound hearing a genuine laugh from Cyr.Not only is a horrible scene for Briar to see a young boy performing services but to see himself in the boy. For one brief second I would like to believe that Cyr was being kind to this boy, relieving him of the old man then getting him a shower and a dentist but really it's in Cyr's best interest to pretty up his merchandise. How can I actually understand where Cyr is coming from and it actually makes a modicum of sense: “I dislike it as well but it's a necessary evil I'm afraid...Not all boys can be beautiful, nor can all our clientèle be rich.” I don't think Briar should feel bad about his desire for Cyr, he deserves some happiness in this whole messed up situation. Oh and thanks by the way letting Briar get laid by Guillermo, let him be the boss for a few brief hours. "Himself"... (cue the dramatic music). Damn tired Briar how dare he get some sleep before giving all the juicy details, for shame!
Try not to doubt yourself baby girl.

You know you love me, XOXO
person SinfulMind
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Finally, we are going to meet Himself! The action speeds up a little, I am so glad to finally meet that man, who is "like no other" :)

Cyr is acting very weird. Sometimes I get the impression that he dislikes when others touch Briar, but other times he doesn't seem to care at all. As much as he seemed to want Briar at the beginning, he acts very coldly towards him and even distances himself. An enigma, Cyr is. I believe that you have great plans for him yet :)

Thank you for posting. Reading gives me some respite from all the cramming for exams I need to do.
person miles
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha ! You're evil ! Stoping like that ! :))
Thanks for the update ! Great chapter but very angsty...
person SinfulMind
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well... I am not exactly dissaponted. Though I did expect Himself to be God like, or perhaps not entirely human being from all the reverence and mystery bubble surrounding his person.

I don't like it that Brar fell for this "magnetism" :/ I thought him to be a little more resistant than that. Well... we'll see where the plot will lead us :)